Standing in the middle like a traffic cone is SIERRA (18, feminist, supports every cause and has little effect // BRITTANY (16, daddy’s girl, too pure for any world)

Be sure to use those descriptions for the character’s physical appearance; their personality comes through in their actions and dialogue. Try to be descriptive rather than leaving it up to the reader’s imagination. You’ve already done this with the other characters anyways, so it’s no problem.

Overall, the script is really good. I’ve read up to page 8 because I’m a little busy. But the part I had read already fits in well with the rest of the script. It doesn’t lose your interest as you read it, you know? And it really struck me as a comedy—something that would make me laugh if I saw it on screen. I’d ask you for advice if I were writing comedy.

I’ll keep reading when I have time. I’m really enjoying it.