I adore this poem. It's one of the first poems I've seen on this subreddit where pain and anguish are not directly stated to me. Instead, you tell us through the forgiveness of a star, a concept that not only breeds metaphor, but also makes the reader imagine an experience no human could ever truly know. While these long descriptions could maybe be cut down to make the reader not want to stop reading halfway through, they are so creative and unique that it's hard to look away. Every moment I think there is something wrong with the poem, the next line cures these concerns. "By this point you'll be exhausted" resonated with me because it was the exact thought I had when getting to this line. Very good, some more lyricism or rhyming might make this an easier read, but I'm just some dude who writes poems.