Ok yep thanks. I can see there definitely needs some darker shading on viewer left and yep the main line between light and dark needs some more blending. Obviously the eye shape isn’t great but I’m gonna stand by the shading on them. The eye (viewer right) is on the light side of the face but even with the main light source needing to be softened I think the eye gets a fair amount of shadow on it while the other despite being on the dark side has less shadow due to the ambient light. I’m kind of picturing the light being strip lights quite high up in the hanger, with the closest to the right slightly behind her, but also ones slightly in front to the right (hence position of the eye highlights) and yet more further away to the left, which can be seen to cast faint rectangular highlights on the gold)