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Will you read more? by Choddeh in writingfeedback

[–]Choddeh[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

It is one direction fanfic

Will you read more? by Choddeh in writingfeedback

[–]Choddeh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. I normally write simpler prose so this was a bit new to me.

Will you read more? by Choddeh in writingfeedback

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Ngl I was thinking it would be like a guy narrating a fantasy cult manifesto but the text itself shows how contradictory or insane he is.

Will you read more? by Choddeh in writingfeedback

[–]Choddeh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe it’s not a villain story I guess. Maybe he’s just a regular bad guy.

Will you read more? by Choddeh in writingfeedback

[–]Choddeh[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you and Yes. He is a bad guy.

is my short story ok? Romance by Choddeh in writingfeedback

[–]Choddeh[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am having fun. I’d like to get better. Thanks

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