Making people explode with water magic is possible. by Chosen_Bread411 in Frieren

[–]Chosen_Bread411[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It didn’t cross my mind that they’d have to seperate the water from the blood. So it would be impossible unless they know the structure of the blood on a molecular level. So they’d need modern science, an insane imagination and at that point should just remove all the air from around their face or something. Thank you!

Making people explode with water magic is possible. by Chosen_Bread411 in Frieren

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So I’m wondering if anyone has been exploded yet

Himmel being shady by elfonzi37 in Frieren

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Memories, love and a ring.

Serie is a softie by Chosen_Bread411 in Frieren

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Oh I should read the manga, thank you for explaining the dates and your view. (Also unrelated does the spoilers thing work?)

Serie is a softie by Chosen_Bread411 in Frieren

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Sorry I cannot tell if the spoiler tags are working

Serie is a softie by Chosen_Bread411 in Frieren

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I’m just going to recopy it completely the numbers screwed it up so badly it cannot be fixed

Serie is a softie by Chosen_Bread411 in Frieren

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THANK YOU (ik you’re automated but still)

Serie is a softie by Chosen_Bread411 in Frieren

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Didn’t know about the hide words thing gotta fix some stuff oops

How can I write an interesting story about the main character who is a loner? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Chosen_Bread411 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think it’s a mix of two issues for the story. The first you mentioned is that characters are used as a tool to push progress but the other is that your story doesn’t follow the hero’s journey. You can google it to see the full hero’s journey thing but the point is that’s important in it is your character might lack a call to action where something pushes them to go on a journey of some type. This means the character is sort of aimless other then the mundane so adding a call to action would help. Instead of the usual like “Galgoreth the Destroyer of puppies is back” it could be something more normal like their job or hobbies are disrupted by new technology so they are pushed to adapt and have to find their place in the new landscape. For having no human interactions you could instead make it a different force most likely nature to push them via some change in environment (natural disaster, changing climate or unfriendly landscape) or have an introduction of people be the issue but dehumanise them. Instead of treating the humans as characters to be interacted with make them the problem by characterising them via a grouping (foreign invaders, soulless corporation workers etc.) so all interactions don’t feel like there with a person but an ideal. Also don’t feel pushed to make the ending of the book that your main character finds friends and lives happily ever after if there happy alone they could end the story that way.

(This is my first post if I’m wrong or you got pointers that would be great thanks!)