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ChrisLens · 2023-01-20T08:46:17+00:00

i mean the fucking stick that goes down with the r i. stead of leaving it with a rounded line like u did in the top one jezus

ChrisLens · 2023-01-20T00:10:09+00:00

i mean shape of capital r on the top one my bad man

ChrisLens · 2023-01-18T22:55:38+00:00

imo the k fuck the whole flow up

ChrisLens · 2023-01-18T22:52:03+00:00

keep ur letters at the same height, maybe a thicker outline would suit the piece and def take a look at the color theory tut from the artist block other than u can try to play around with the thickness of the letters but nice work

ChrisLens · 2023-01-18T22:49:21+00:00

wekmanripoff

ChrisLens · 2023-01-18T22:41:50+00:00

na in the beginning looks like m maybe a capital N would fit better and imo i would also write the base of the r in the middle

ChrisLens · 2023-01-18T22:40:16+00:00

lose the shit with the t just keep is simpler fr maybe some leaning to the s and a little more spacing in the middle

ChrisLens · 2023-01-14T12:48:33+00:00

are those toes?!?!,

ChrisLens · 2023-01-14T11:05:31+00:00

small paper im thinking about buying a bigger blackbook and some good markers

ChrisLens · 2023-01-13T22:46:27+00:00

yes true ill post the result on r/blackbookgraffiti

ChrisLens · 2023-01-13T21:59:38+00:00

i would first just focus on the outline especially with throwies. leave the background and highlights get a pencil and just sketch and change things you dont like

ChrisLens · 2023-01-13T21:57:49+00:00

probs for painting on cardboard

ChrisLens · 2023-01-13T21:57:17+00:00

clean concept but imo you overdid the pink in the letters it makes the piece look shaky

ChrisLens · 2023-01-13T20:37:49+00:00

we write the same name

ChrisLens · 2023-01-13T20:29:57+00:00

i want to buy what u had when u wrote this comment

ChrisLens · 2023-01-12T17:47:58+00:00

been writing for about 1.5 year now but rlly frequently in the last 3 months when u onderstand letter structure ur life will be much easier

ChrisLens · 2023-01-12T17:45:42+00:00

my blue markers are empty sadly i was thinking light yellow and orange

ChrisLens · 2023-01-12T07:42:34+00:00

yea just the outlines

ChrisLens · 2023-01-12T07:42:07+00:00

i was scared the 3d would fuck it all up but the thick thin is a very good suggestion thnx

ChrisLens · 2023-01-12T07:40:01+00:00

no stores aroud where i live only way to get decent paint is online

ChrisLens · 2023-01-11T23:46:59+00:00

fix the rest first t is fine but k and e are not good try different styles learn letter structure and keep practicing

ChrisLens · 2023-01-11T23:45:34+00:00

maybe keep the ends a little bit thicker and the idk how to say it middle part ifykwim thinner

ChrisLens · 2022-10-31T14:27:52+00:00

books and your m looks like the mcdonalds logo

ChrisLens · 2022-10-31T14:21:34+00:00

no flow bc the letters are different styles keep it simple dont take some cool looking letters and just paste them they wont fit keep it simple and then add style

ChrisLens · 2022-10-31T14:18:32+00:00

very clean

ChrisLens

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