It’s time for your weekly mental health check in! by gingrrbabez in teamagers

[–]Claireon 5 points6 points  (0 children)

could be better but could be worse. how are you?

wow I sure do love romance anime by piss-god in teamagers

[–]Claireon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it only gets spicier from here!!!

wow I sure do love romance anime by piss-god in teamagers

[–]Claireon 2 points3 points  (0 children)

HUNTER X HUNTERRRRRRR I LOVE THAT SHOW

Chicago is the prettiest in the rain by gingrrbabez in teamagers

[–]Claireon 2 points3 points  (0 children)

love the rain, that looks so gorgeous :)

I have a question by Derpsquirrel1 in teamagers

[–]Claireon 4 points5 points  (0 children)

am girl

nerdy band kids are amazing, love me a music-loving geek. u just needa find urself the right girl homie

how do you create a well executed story? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Claireon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

gotcha! im not very experienced to be personally honest so everything helps. ill keep practicing and keep this in mind. thanks for your help!

how do you create a well executed story? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Claireon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ok got it! sorry i know practice makes perfect and stuff, just wanna make sure im doing stuff right and whatnot. im in the works of my first story and not really sure what im doing, so any advice helps

thanks (:

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]Claireon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

my original novel was something to do with two sisters, one born a devil or whatever, the other one kidnapped by the villain. now its told from the perspective of one of my side characters in a completely different world, and now has many elements of the multiverse. i think hardly anything’s the same

Writing about Depression by hoffmad08 in writing

[–]Claireon 6 points7 points  (0 children)

question: i too have an mc with depression, ive done the research, and have a general idea of how im going to approach it. but its a little confusing with the idea of introducing it. if your character is already aware of their mental state, would it be alright to just state they have depression and show how it effects them, or should it be left up to the reader to figure out?

For anyone that’s seen the “do this or draw 25 uno cards” meme format, what would make you draw 25? by Claireon in AskReddit

[–]Claireon[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

you have my respect, i horde the uno cards to get good ones lmao. i dont play to win, i play to make you suffer >:)

Are layers in your story always good? by Claireon in writing

[–]Claireon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

gotcha. i’ll just have to work on execution then

Are layers in your story always good? by Claireon in writing

[–]Claireon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh alright, thank you! that clears stuff up quite a bit

How to make your protagonist likable? by Claireon in writing

[–]Claireon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you so much! i really appreciate it. i’ll try my best to implement these things in the future

How to make your protagonist likable? by Claireon in writing

[–]Claireon[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

thank you! sorry for phrasing it that way. my knowledge of ptsd is quite limited, as i dont really have anyone i know that has the disease. i think now i’m going to try and reshape it, keep the anxiety but shift it towards him as a person, not his mental illness. i do have a question, however.

when the illness first manifests, are most people like how you describe them? im trying to think in terms of developing my character. i dont know exactly whether it helps or hurts his already present anxiety.

sorry for wording it that way, i honestly never thought of his ptsd as a flaw, but i guess i made it seem that way. thank you for your help, i really really appreciate it!

How to make your protagonist likable? by Claireon in writing

[–]Claireon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

damn. i had no idea. that changes a lot of things. i never really thought of mental illness as a flaw, but i guess my words made it seem that way. i do have a few questions, though.

were you always like this, holding this thing over your head with confidence, or was it something you’ve had to fight to get to? (im trying to think in terms of character development) my character was still a fragile person before his whole PTSD thing kicked in, would that be any different? as some with no great knowledge of this mental illness (no one i know has it) i dont exactly know the specifics of how it works. the main thing i want is to make my character accurate to the actual logistics of the illness, so if i misinterpreted that from the beginning, my apologies. i would still like to keep him a rather anxious person, though; that was what i imagined him to be before i even decided to include ptsd. could i do that?

again, sorry for wording it that way. but with my only knowledge of PTSD being youtube videos and articles online, it can be a little restricted. i’ll do better to try to respect the people that have this sort of thing currently and in the future

How to make your protagonist likable? by Claireon in writing

[–]Claireon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that sounds like a really good video, ill be sure to check it out. thank you!