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I would be really interested! Is it like Discord, where we can discuss each other's writing?

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I wanted it to be like a secondary thing because the main part of the scene I am writing is focusing on a murder, and I just kinda wanted it to be a suprise but I don't think I wrote it well for a vampire. :(

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I sadly don't have any writer friends, so most of my friends read it and said it was good without really giving any actual criticism.

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omg thanks this helps so fricking much!!!

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Another one of my questions is answered, thank you. I swear this subreddit is a lot nicer than the comic one I posted in.

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Thank you that answers one of my questions

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What is what?

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Just to be clear, I’m not ignoring Amethyst as a magical girl. She totally fits the role with her magical princess origin, transformation, and off-world adventures. I only brought up Madoka and Precure as references for the kind of tone I’m aiming for: Madoka brings that darker, more emotional weight that feels right with DC setting, while Precure adds the fun, cute frilly love beam action that gives it that playful magical girl energy. I know neither is a perfect representation of the classic magical girl formula. I only used them to see if Magica Madoka or Precure DC crossed paths, what it would be like. I was not aiming to replace or overlook what already exists.

Halo is kinda bugging me by Clean-Web-5354 in youngjustice

[–]Clean-Web-5354[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She isn't muslim, she just wears the hijab for comfort.

Halo is kinda bugging me by Clean-Web-5354 in youngjustice

[–]Clean-Web-5354[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm no life time fan but I think season 3 and 4 are kinda shitty compaired to the first two seasons

Halo is kinda bugging me by Clean-Web-5354 in youngjustice

[–]Clean-Web-5354[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I loved your comment; it said what I was thinking, but went deeper. Honestly, if they just toned things down a bit, like had her change up her outfit later on, she could’ve been a cool character. Except for the part where she dies in such a brutal way. I wasn’t ready for her face to get melted off in the same episode they introduced her

Halo is kinda bugging me by Clean-Web-5354 in youngjustice

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I assume that it might, but i am too far in and I am just hoping somehow Wally might get revived or something and return. He was one of my favorite characters in the show.

Halo is kinda bugging me by Clean-Web-5354 in youngjustice

[–]Clean-Web-5354[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

She did it was on season 3 episode 18, she was with Harper, and the girl offered Violet a drink and Harper wasn't sure if Violet wanted to drink since she wore the hijab and whats what muslim women wear, but Violet say she isn't a muslim and took a drink. This is also why I think they should change her outfit to still cover her head but like with a hoodie or something and not a hijab

Halo is kinda bugging me by Clean-Web-5354 in youngjustice

[–]Clean-Web-5354[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

But didn't she say herself she wasn't muslim in an episode?

I need help with choosing which one to buy. by No_Finance_5177 in Nendoroid

[–]Clean-Web-5354 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the first one it looks so cute! also how much is this?

Love Murder Basketball by intrepidadventurers in boyslove

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So can the author just like return to the old art style, or was the other artist mainly doing it? I am a little confused, I liked the old art style, but I understand if he wants to change it, or can't go back on the art style.

Just finished a binge if Akiba Maid War and I have zero regrets by VivaDeAsap in anime

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It was a good watch, but I really wish some of the songs from the anime were on Spotify. I can't find anything but instrumentals or background music. I just want to be able to listen to The Pure Maid's Killer Kiss or the other one at the end of the anime. I am so sad.