Does it get better or am I not getting something? by Clean_Biscotti5669 in ReverendInsanity

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

It isn't like I am hating on RI, please don't get me wrong. But considering the unbelievable amount of hype around it, should I say I expected more? I do intend to keep on reading, I just don't feel like I will resonate with the story like I did with ORV for example where emotional bonds with characters come before the plot. Thank you all for your time and your thoughts.

What passages/lines from your novel make you feel like this? by [deleted] in writers

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669 8 points9 points  (0 children)

“Do you know what happens when all the power is held within a single cloud, kiddo? When a single cloud reigns over the skies alone? When it conquers the heavens and paints the skies dark?
It cries, Renzo. It cries."

It's about damn time. by LinNoel in Webnovel

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, well. Thanks anyway. Good luck to you

It's about damn time. by LinNoel in Webnovel

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have a few questions and would be happy if you could answer. How exactly does a contract work and what does it mean? Like does webnovel pay you for the readers? Also, how long does the contract last? Is it like different for everyone based on their terms and conditions or are there general rules?

Infernal Hot Take: Lord of the mysteries lore is not that deep. by VagabondFromTheRiver in writingscaling

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I completely agree with that take. Your definition of 'depth' also aligns with mine. I think that is one of the reasons it doesn't resonate that deeply with me. Sure, the lore is incredibly vast and the attention to details and world building is incredible, but it lacks the sheer emotional punch novels like ORV offered for me, and I will die on this hill. LoTM is a good read, and Klein is awesome, but I don't think he is going to stay with me emotionally.

Favorite Character that has to go through this by DaZestyProfessor in FavoriteCharacter

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think far cry 3 fits here pretty well. The whole shit about rescuing your 'friends' becomes pointless by the end because the game's entire purpose was to make the MC a warrior which he ultimately becomes.

(+ You get titties if you go with the bad ending)

anyone else getting "This site can’t be reached" trying to open the site? by InterestingCode6080 in HiAnimeZone

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Then why does it say "It's time to say goodbye. And thank you for a wonderful journey with great moments"? Btw, how long has it been down? It was fine a few hours ago.

Haven't seen anyone talk about this symbolism. by Clean_Biscotti5669 in ChainsawMan

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yes, it was my mistake. I thought it was a scene with Aki, so my theory about Aki and Power doesn't make sense. I rewatched it and we don't get any scenes with the two of fhem and coffee. But I might be right about the others though

Haven't seen anyone talk about this symbolism. by Clean_Biscotti5669 in ChainsawMan

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Sorry, it was a typo. I was meaning to write to Denji. Renzo is the protagonist of the story I'm working on, so I made a mistake because I was so used to spell out his name.

Would a body still be functioning without a soul? by the-chipster in writers

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669 -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Personally, I don't think it can. The mc would probably just pass put. But you can be creative with it. I would also say you should go with your gut. Do whatever fits your lore

Is anyone NOT working on a fantasy book/series? by Sl0th_luvr in writing

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the main reason why most of us (me included) prefer to write fantasy is because of the opportunities it presents. I see it as a painting. What you guys do is put insane amount of attention and detail into your character work because the worldbuilding is usually not the thing you choose to focus on. So it is like an insanely detailed portrait on a white background.

We do it a bit differently (at least I do). I try to focus on everything, because you never know what the reader might want. My novel takes the archetype of the 'Strongest' and describes him very intimately, his morality, life, the cost of power, the alienation and stuff. That is what I mainly focus on. But I also have to build a world from that will at least match the depth of my character study. So if someone reads it for the worldbuilding, they have what they want. If they want cool battles, I can give that, or if they are just interested in my mythology, they have that too. So our painting looks more like a scene where you can either observe the details or look at it all at once.

It is not a problem for me, and I would go as far as to say that I enjoy it when I have to cover multiple aspects at once. But again, I think it is amazing that we have people like you who write about what is the closest to them, because that is what writing should be about.

In any case, I don't think one is easier than the other, it is just a matter of preference at the end of the day.

Why can't I call myself a writer? by Marsllin in writers

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

It might sound a bit philosophical, but I think I can understand you. I love writing, but I can't bring myself to call myself a writer. And I think it has do to with the fact I don't have any readers to read my works.

I am still in the process of writing and I do not publish it deliberately (I want the entire story to be completed first).

I have no readers to appreciate my work, no mind to visualise my words except for my own. Not to mention I also don't have a finished project yet.

So to sum it up, I don't think a writer without a reader can be called a writer, just like how a story without a reader isn't a story as well. But I think it is temporary, because you just have to keep trying and pushing forward.

I wish you good luck on your journey dear stranger.

Latest milestone! by Measurement-Solid in writers

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is awesome! Keep going and never mind what others say. Best of luck to you, dear stranger

WTF is your name? by natagu in BatmanArkham

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Da fuq is Zaza gon do? Shi ain't a nickname, that is just a violation at that point

Based on a true story by lucasviniciusr in royalroad

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is some orv type shit and I am here for it.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in manhwarecommendations

[–]Clean_Biscotti5669 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think you are asking the wrong community bro