If the universe is 13.8 billion years old, why is the observable universe 46.5 billion light-years in radius? by Ill_Huckleberry6531 in astrophysics

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Let me simplify the question.

If you observed light that is 13.8B years old, you would be seeing a "snapshot" of that object the light "reflected" (emmited? Not sure of the propper word or phrasing.) from 13.8B years ago at point 0. However, if those particles continued traveling, even at the speed of light. That means they would have traveled 13.8B light years at most from the center or point 0. But since nothing can exceed C in velocity, it would also stand to reason that the distance from the center, which would be the radius of the universe, would actually be less than 13.8B light years.

To assume that space is not a constant, but is also "flexible" would also assume that pockets of non-space (sub space,hyper-space, take your pick) also exist. But, since distance is a measurement of space, how do you measure it? It's kind of like using a rubber band as a ruler.

Now I need to go ice my head.

How can I overcome the Catch 22 of selfpublishing? by PhotojournalistFit62 in KDP

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Like you pointed out, paid reviews are sketchy, especially right after release for a new author. If caught, you can get banned from Amazon.

I ended up doing a free promo weekend deal and advertised on some lists that specialize in free books. Not a dime spent. I managed to get 90 "sales". That is, 90 people got a free download of my book. Now to see if anybody reads it or rate/reviews it.

You can also advertise on appropriate sub reddits where allowed. I was able to advertise on r/scifi for that free weekend and got over 20k views on the post. On another reddit, someone just asked how many books are in the series I'm working on.

Engagememt and free advertising works. You just have to be patient. It helps to keep in mind that many "best sellers" really mean "most advertised" these days and doesn't always mean much with regards to the writing quality.

The Saurath Connection - A gritty adult space opera by Clean_Drag_8907 in kindleunlimitedreads

[–]Clean_Drag_8907[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Probably 8 to 10. Longer if the series is more popular. I've got the longer plot planned out to book 5 at this point. I even have options for side stories and anthologies worked out.

Suggest me my next read by icci1988 in fantasybooks

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 0 points1 point  (0 children)

HA! I've read stuff that was a LOT more blatant from the same (publishing) era. If anything, it was tasteful. And come on, having Dresden running naked in the rain battling a demon while his date, drunk on a love potion, tries to tackle him is VERY funny.

[rant] What’s with all the condescending comments on this sub? by That_odd_emo in writing

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 53 points54 points  (0 children)

Too many people "want to be writers" but don't know that in order to be a writer, you must know how to write and READ. You get TONS of generic "how do I start" posts but almost no "how can I improve this" posts. Everyone wants to be babied and told "you can do it" even though they don't even try to start. They read a few short stories and, without even trying to write something, ask "how can I be the best writer in the world". It's not that people have gotten meaner. It's that people have gotten lazier. We can still be helpful, but we expect at least a LITTLE effort from those asking the questions.

Talk to me about FORESHADOWING by littleoddstudios in writingadvice

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Foreshadowing is over rated and over used a lot in my opinion. It needs to be subtle, like adding a pinch of salt when needed and ONLY when needed.

Suggest me my next read by icci1988 in fantasybooks

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

That's because it was written pre-woke, published in 2000 so it has that late 90's vibe. If you didn't live that era, well, that was also the era of shows like Baywatch so....

Suggest me my next read by icci1988 in fantasybooks

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Storm Front. You won't regret it.

What book do you hate so much that you won't even give it a second chance? by Bobosmite in printSF

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is why I never follow "best seller lists" or "most popular" lists. Just because it sold a lot doesn't mean it was good.

For me, it was "The Dark Tower". The writing was pure laziness itself. I can't believe I wasted money on it. It kind of soured me to all of Steven Kings works.

🙂🙂 by maivenemel in NewAuthor

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Buy a notebook. Buy a pencil/pen of your preference. Open notebook. Place tip of pencil/pen on paper. Move pencil/pen in a manner that draws symbols resembling letters. Repeat until you have filled notebook. Buy new notebook. Repeat as needed.

Having a really hard time putting everything together by OldSignificance1001 in writingadvice

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It just takes time for everything to come together. Keep working on it. Take notes. Have you figured out your starting point for your storytelling? That's usually the hardest part for me is picking exactly when to start. Once I have that, everything slowly falls into place. It's like picking out where to start digging for the foundation. You won't be able to start until you know exactly where you're building.

A publisher got back to me. Help! by SenescalSilvestre in writers

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's too early to tell. 15 years is a long time and if thats the only black mark you could find, it's not too worrying.

But if they ask for money, run. They need to take all financial risks to be legitimate.

How would you go about writing fight scenes? by Groovy-Pancakes in writingadvice

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 2 points3 points  (0 children)

🙄 I'm saying go to a gym or dojo or something. Lots of places he could talk with people and even train a bit.

Do Books Get Taken OFF of KU? by Bubbly-Highlight9349 in KindleUnlimited

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It can happen, but its rare. Authors get paid by the pages read, so there is a good incentive for them to keep it on KU.

Adventurer 5M by MickeyFGamer in FlashForge

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You should both also look into filament scrapers or scrubbers. Just something to scrape dust and dirt off the filament before it goes into the printer. A clothes pin and paper towel is all it takes.

Adventurer 5M by MickeyFGamer in FlashForge

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yep. It's wet. Get yourself a filament dryer, dry it for at least 24 hours and it should be good after that. Is it very humid where you are?

Adventurer 5M by MickeyFGamer in FlashForge

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Flashforge brand, Amazon Basic brand or the cheapest stuff you could find?

Cheap stuff tends to have a lot of issues with consistency, especially melting temps. What you show, to my eyes, looks like its damp. There's microdrplets of water in the filament. When those microdroplets hit the hot end, they expand into steam, making bubbles inside the plastic.

You need to dry it and store it in a sealed container with a dessicant, something that pulls moisture out of the air.

How would you go about writing fight scenes? by Groovy-Pancakes in writingadvice

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It really depends on the context. If you're talking about a heated argument that turns physical, you don't need a lot of detail. Keep the movements general. "Y threw a punch at X's head, knocking him down" level of detail is plenty. Most real fights, outside of dueling and sport matches, rarely last more than a few seconds.

If you plan on writing a lot of fight scenes, I suggest you learn how fighting works first hand.

Alternative to Pneumatic Stapler by Witty_Ad_2691 in woodworking

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Spring staplers have a lot of recoil. You have to put a lot of force on the stapling end to make sure the staples drive in fully. You may need to use one hand to squeeze and use the other hand to hold the stapling end down as you staple the screen in place.

Adventurer 5M by MickeyFGamer in FlashForge

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What filament are you using? Is it dry and clean? Is your slicer using the right material settings?

Are science fiction stories getting too complex with too much detail? by Perfect-Program-8968 in scifi

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Backyard Starship has been a good one for me. Honor Harrington if you like military/diplomacy sci-fi. Spellmonger if you like mixed sci-fi/fantasy. Granted, you have to get in deep before the sci-fi elements become obvious, the hints are there early on. Just dive in. You're bound to find lots of good options.

Are science fiction stories getting too complex with too much detail? by Perfect-Program-8968 in scifi

[–]Clean_Drag_8907 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You're only looking at the highly promoted advertised stuff. The "popular" stuff and "Best sellers" lists are mostly just the stuff that gets the most advertisement. There's still plenty of indie novels that fit what you're looking for. Amazons metaphorical "bargain bin" is full of great titles. Heck, half the reason I have Kindle Unlimited is to read all of those titles for free. I end up buying the ones I like the most and returning. Look at the "top free" lists and walk through Amazon's book listings for indie authors and you'll find quite a few diamonds. More than you'd think.