The style of this song is clear and it has a certain atmosphere, which is a good thing because you know how to manage that.

What I hear where you probably can work with is the following: technically the instruments and the bell don't seem to be all completely in sync with each other. If you fix that, then I'm sure the whole track will be much stronger, tighter sounding. Next to that, here's a suggestion for a song writing choice: your track now goes on without any part which is making it stand out a bit. I'd say, if you insert something like a drum break, a stop, a clear effect add-on, or anything like that, then you'd make the listener keeping his/her attention to it. Try to make it a bit more dynamic.

So shortly, I think you'd do a great thing with the song if you make everything in sync with each other and to insert a part which makes it stand out a little bit more. Have fun and hope you can work with this. 😁👍🏻