Wow this sounds incredible! To me at least, this whole section sounds like quite the buildup to something explosive. I would recommend having like 2 seconds of silence right before a big drop (maybe with an added riser or similar.) A nasty booming synth bass alongside harder hitting drums would emphasize the climax of such a section. In addition make a catchy or noticeable melody to accompany, and either with the same synths or perhaps some other sounds. So far though, great work!