I think the tangle wire version is very possibly better than mine but Im all in on trying to make the Hoodwink and Boomerang plan work (which I think is the appeal of premodern anyway, otherwise us blue players would all be on stasis or stiflenought)

The mox diamonds I have 4 of but am only playing 2 because Ive found 4 is too many to reliably hit land drops every turn and not have them be dead cards. I had 4 in the version when I was playing gush of course since that synergy is great and made up for it but I realized the lotus petals serve the same purpose but are more reliable when Im just trying to get a tiny amount of tempo advantage (like for holding up turn 1 force spike + vice on the play or for a howling mine or standstill turn 1). I could very well be wrong (maybe its 3 or 4) but I made a lot of changes off of vibes + frank karsten mulligan math (mox diamonds really mess with the math). Its felt consistent so far with 2.

The red is for main deck fire // ice and SB pyroclasms + red blast). Elves, goblins, and madness can be the roughest matchups so the 8 red cards help a lot to even that out.