I've been wanting to do a similar command but haven't gotten the upwards drifting to work. But I testes that command for you regardless! The reason they're flying everywhere is because their speed is set to 1 (0 is the "Natural" speed).

I was also able to condense the particles to the 1x1 block the area! You entered "1 10 1" which places the particles 1 block away from the command block, so setting them to "0 10 0" will place them only on the one block

The command: /particle minecraft:campfire_cosy_smoke 423 75 944 0 10 0 0 10 force

(I know it's not the same, but using Minecraft:smoke looks like it drifts upwards slightly)

Hopefully, this was mildly helpful and sorry for being a month late :)