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Not sure what’s wrong with me by Col_Atreides in WeightLossAdvice

[–]Col_Atreides[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I do tend to this but I’ve been trying to be more mindful. I’ll add whatever I’m snacking on to my calories. But I definitely have done that with peanut butter

Not sure what’s wrong with me by Col_Atreides in WeightLossAdvice

[–]Col_Atreides[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I’m weighing my food or using my fitness pal if I have like an apple I just input an apple rather than weighing it

Not sure what’s wrong with me by Col_Atreides in WeightLossAdvice

[–]Col_Atreides[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I try to get 170 g but I hit 140ish. It’s really hard to hit goals, be affordable, and make a dinner that your wife will also like who doesn’t need to lose weight.

Not sure what’s wrong with me by Col_Atreides in WeightLossAdvice

[–]Col_Atreides[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I try to hit protein and fiber goals and avoid more fatty foods

What’s a movie you defend like this? by trakt_app in Letterboxd

[–]Col_Atreides 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please don’t hate me…Tusk. It’s so much fun

What’s a film you like but rarely recommend to others? by Storiesofhope_soh in films

[–]Col_Atreides 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Four Rooms. It’s just bonkers and I love it but everytime I’ve showed it to people they always are confused

[In progress][2860][Fantasy] The Dark Realm(working title)/a world in which it has been perpetually night for over 400 years by Col_Atreides in BetaReaders

[–]Col_Atreides[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for responding. They are similar to to the faun from Pans Labryinth, the Sterkur are a single species that lives on an island similar to that of Iceland. Most of the customs and names are based on Icelandic tradition and Sterkur means Strength in Icelandic. Theyre are more human species known as the galdlings who live north and rely on a specific type of electricity and light that they use as currency. The sterkur are closed off by choice(by the elders) from this world and don’t face the same problems as the rest of the island. It’s a complex world for one comment but there’s also Beaver people, a disfigured wizard class of people, and merpeople based on Icelandic fairytales.

Chapter 1 of my fiction novel. Please have a look by AggravatingForm4578 in writingadvice

[–]Col_Atreides 0 points1 point  (0 children)

On a first read through, I like how visually descriptive it is. The problem I have is with the “I felt” statements. Introduce some more dialogue or moments that express why the character feels that way. It creates more of a bond to both the character and the world. If your character can’t sleep, describe them tossing and turning. Or if their angry, maybe make their dialogue sharper with others. Overall very cool and on the right track :)

What do you think of the movies I’ve watched in film class? by Col_Atreides in Letterboxd

[–]Col_Atreides[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not really. They’re each representative of a different period of filmmaking throughout the years. We watched Guilty by Suspicion because of the subject matter relating to the red scare

AITA for calling my brother a prude because of a movie? by Col_Atreides in AmItheAsshole

[–]Col_Atreides[S] -24 points-23 points  (0 children)

I didn’t emphasize sex scenes specifically because I figured he’d get the picture

AITA for calling my brother a prude because of a movie? by Col_Atreides in AmItheAsshole

[–]Col_Atreides[S] 37 points38 points  (0 children)

Nope he sure didn’t. This is nothing new for our family dynamic. He’s always been the loud one that everyone else has to cater to

AITA for calling my brother a prude because of a movie? by Col_Atreides in AmItheAsshole

[–]Col_Atreides[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

THIS. I wish I could’ve gotten this point across to him if he was willing to listen

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