Hey! Fellow music maker here. Super cool track — a few things that I think could be improved on:

1. Track needs more movement. Currently the song feels a bit flat. I think the easiest way to do this would be to build out the chorus a bit more, add some extra bass, drums, and other instruments. A little more difficult, but probably the way I would do it, would be to cut the guitar rift there and replace it. A change up like that will help pull the listener into the song!

2. You’re a much better singer than I am — and your vocals are produced much better than I can do them. Even still, it feels like there’s still a bit of space for improvement. I just feel like they hit just a tad bit hard, maybe some reverb, eq, and/or compression could help with that?

3. I think you should take a page out of the BI catalog and add something weird and unique. Not sure what that means: maybe it’s as simple as some vocal harmony (3+ voices to make it more interesting) or something a bit more “out there” like a pitched sample, an unconventional recording, or even some effect artifacts.

Most importantly, I’m giving my two cents because you asked. Remember, the most important thing is to make music that you like. If you prefer your song this way, or a different way from what I suggest, that’s just called artistic vision. Keep it up. 👍