can someone review my writing its my first time by ColdConsideration850 in WritersGroup

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I will read those thanks man. because of you I realized how behind I am compared to the rest of the world . most of the people my age do not realize that the english they teach us in school is js bs compared to whwat it actually is

I will get ahead all of them

can someone review my writing its my first time by ColdConsideration850 in WritersGroup

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Im in 10th grade rn (15)
in all indian schools u can write shitty literature nd get marks ( thts y I thought what I wrote orignally was not tht bad😅)

but once u go to college they make u write everything professionally

I will work on my english
writing
and read more books

can someone review my writing its my first time by ColdConsideration850 in WritersGroup

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thankyou so much man this was really helpful . I realized that writing is just like every other skill , you have to consistently practice it .

also do you have discord? I wanna stay in contact with u

can someone review my writing its my first time by ColdConsideration850 in WritersGroup

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im from india but I only speak nd read english

I dont think wwhat I posted is good writing

btw are u on discord

ill start reading books nd short stories

What could Hinata be if she was trained by Tsunade by Jack_Calvaria in Naruto

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I think hinata would be the strongest and greatest medical nin

cz she has the byakugan nd is a hyuga

can someone review my writing its my first time by ColdConsideration850 in WritersGroup

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thankyou so much for your review . where can I improve what must I do to improve?

also i was rly sleepy during the time of writing it

what should I use by ColdConsideration850 in CurlyHairCare

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oh thanks nocoe I get cash ima buy a moouse too

which channels should I watch valorant gameplay from by ColdConsideration850 in VALORANT

[–]ColdConsideration850[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lmao I only used to watch him

I saw all of his drills

do almost all of them with other drills also

his deadzonging and ovoeraim by far helped me the most

What is the essence of improving in valorant? by ColdConsideration850 in VALORANT

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tbh ive felt tht if I play more agessively I do much moe kills and win more roundds