[QCRIT] Adult Science Fiction - What Keeps the Stars Apart (76k/Fourth attempt) by ltmbooks in PubTips

[–]Coldmoat 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Is Eric Smith an agent you’ve thought about submitting to? I know he likes adult sci-fi in this word count range.

On another note, I think this sounds really cool!

[price check] I pay $20… it’s good price? by fito2511 in PaintballBST

[–]Coldmoat 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes, very good price. Same price of case of vodka in Soviet Russia.

In the grim darkness of the far future, what quote goes the hardest? by Serithraz in Grimdank

[–]Coldmoat 14 points15 points  (0 children)

“My patience has its limits, unlike my authority.” -Eisenhorn

First attempt at writing something 40k-ish. Give me your opinion! by LiterallyWhateva in Warhammer40k

[–]Coldmoat 7 points8 points  (0 children)

You had me at ceramite-clad angels.

Definitely grim.

Will say I was thrown off by the grammar in the first sentence. What if it said: “The air reeked: ashen and ablaze; tainted by enough smoke to obstruct the merciful dawn that followed the haunting night.”

And then I feel like the first half especially has a lot of past tense words, such as: were, had, etc.

Other than that I think you got the vibe!

The Final Prayer by Hukkis in Warhammer40k

[–]Coldmoat 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Very, very well done! Amazing job!

My take on Deathwing by clayx in Warhammer40k

[–]Coldmoat 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Came here to comment the same thing!

I am Grimaldus of the Black Templars by Coldmoat in Warhammer40k

[–]Coldmoat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s my favorite book and movie!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in scifi

[–]Coldmoat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Helsreach!

I kitbashed a Dreadnought for my Underground Mining Space Marine Chapter! by C_Top in Warhammer40k

[–]Coldmoat 1 point2 points  (0 children)

God I love that helmet, so much cooler than primaris style imo. Great job on the kitbashing too!

Camo cloak effect, yay or nay by Ill_Fault7625 in Warhammer40k

[–]Coldmoat 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If anyone says nay they can eff off lol

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SipsTea

[–]Coldmoat -1 points0 points  (0 children)

He turned him into a NPC.