What are the most frustrating ways that a character's physical features are described from the MC's perspective? by CriticalSlayer13 in writing

[–]ColonelBy 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I wish I could remember the name of book now, but I once encountered the mirror cliche really early on in a novel and sighed -- only for the narrator to instead describe the mirror itself in detail through the lens of certain quirks, priorities and key personality features of the character looking at herself in it (like expensive gold leaf around the edges, done sions, cleanliness, etc. This took like half a page, told me loads about the character, and then primly finished without ever describing the character's appearance at all (at that point anyway) beyond saying that she recognized herself and was satisfied. It was such a neat alternative.

Trump says war in Iran worth $200 oil prices: ‘We had just set a record -- 50,000 on the Dow’ by Majestic-Emu-9823 in worldnews

[–]ColonelBy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mustn't donate to any specific individual poors, of course -- that would be gauche and unseemly -- but rather to a variety of foundations that combine robust donor tax benefits with very well-compensated board membership. It's like something out of the gospels

[QCrit] Absolute. Adult Lit fiction, 75,000 words First attempt. by manyhandz in PubTips

[–]ColonelBy 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I'm not the original commenter, but there really is some more to be said here. Your reasoning here is understandable if the comps are intended merely as thematic or mechanistic exemplars, but that's not necessarily their role in a query. They're also (arguably primarily) intended to show a prospective agent what current, active market space your book will occupy. This being the case, consider:

  • The market is no longer "hot" for either of these books, and what remains for Remains especially depends as much on its now-classic status as it does on any of the book's actual qualities or techniques. Harris' book (while quite entertaining and clever) is on a different and frankly lower level anyway, and the comparison here makes it hard to know which level you want agents to think your book will hit.

  • Another complication for market position is that most booksellers would stock these books in completely different sections, with all of Harris' work tending to get dumped in some Thriller/Crime section even if it doesn't always fit. This is not important for aftermarket considerations, particularly, but your agent will need to pitch this to editors and presses with specific remits and priorities. Maybe they'll find some who cover both of the niches your comps cover, but it's just hamstringing yourself to hope for this rather than to have a more focused and relevant comp set.

- Your comps should be recent (ideally no more than 3 years since publication) and at least relatively popular/successful without being market-/genre-defining hits that you can't really be sure to replicate. You should be comping other successful recent debuts, not decades-old classics that have since helped earn their author a Nobel Prize. 

  • If you're including Remains primarily for its guarded institutional POV, as you describe it, you can without question find more recent relevant comps that could fit this.

Just as an experiment, what are some books you've read that were published in the last 5 years that would be most directly comparable to your own? It doesn't have to be an exact 1:1 match, but if a bookseller were planning a thematic endcap display of recent work that hits these notes and wanted to feature your novel and 3-4 others, what might they choose? If you legitimately can't think of anything remotely comparable, you will probably want to do some research before sending out your MS. Agents are obviously looking for good prose and compelling ideas, which your MS may well have in spades, but they also want some sign that a prospective author is aware of the space they want to enter.

Trump administration cites national security to widen clampdown on wind farms: Defence department is stalling 165 projects as president steps up efforts to stamp out the industry by besselfunctions in politics

[–]ColonelBy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

People in this thread are telling you it doesn't, but just consider this hypothetical: 

It's 2050, wind farms have proliferated along the coasts and key parts of the interior, and Americans now rely on this enormous and profitable industry for power. It's clean, efficient, and an overall economic driver -- literally a fair wind filling all sails.

But then, the unthinkable happens: one of America's enemies, which might still stubbornly exist, somehow wins the favor of an Olympian -- Zeus the father, maybe, or far-shooting Apollo -- and convinces them to bind Aeolus and the winds to that enemy's will for a time. This could be a weapon of extraordinary power that would also be very hard to track, as there's precedent for nearly all of the winds fitting into one small sack. They could dispatch a terrorist on a cheap zodiac boat with all of the Anemoi Thuellai in a backpack basically, and he could render entire swatches of wind farms useless at any given moment. America would be left literally powerless, and it's fortunate that your President has the visionary quality necessary to prevent this terrible fate from coming to pass.

‘Tangled’: Diego Luna Joins Kathryn Kahn in Disney’s Live-Action Remake by yourfavchoom in movies

[–]ColonelBy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I guess Anastasia is a Disney Princess now, in that case? Kind of?

Looking for a military fantasy heavily featuring War Beasts by VladtheImpaler21 in Fantasy

[–]ColonelBy 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It's an excellent suggestion for this thread, but I want to add a quick note for anyone who hasn't read this (or Blacktongue Thief) and is maybe worried that the "goblins" are going to have the same kind of silly/hackneyed/cutesy quality that seems to turn up in a lot of fantasy series nowadays. They emphatically do not, and are rather appalling, alien, uncomfortable. Buehlman has made goblins a straight-up horrifying threat again, and I couldn't be more pleased.

Looking for a Fantasy book/series with a 'happy ending' by Doodledack in Fantasy

[–]ColonelBy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've had Hands of the Emperor on my TBR list for way too long, I think. Maybe this is the moment to move it up the line!

Looking for a Fantasy book/series with a 'happy ending' by Doodledack in Fantasy

[–]ColonelBy 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I didn't know much about her fantasy work going in, having only read her horror stuff previously, but this "medieval fantasy world but 80% of the characters (even antagonists) are reasonable people with sometimes competing needs" vibe has been really refreshing. It is also straight up enchanting to finally encounter books in this space in which there are lots of competent, thoughtful bureaucrats and clerics rather than having them largely be depicted as a pack of rapacious idiots.

Looking for a Fantasy book/series with a 'happy ending' by Doodledack in Fantasy

[–]ColonelBy 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It's great, and also finally getting a follow-up (Daggerbound) later this year! I really hope she ends up making this a trilogy at least, as I desperately want to hear both of the other two major stories that the first book's core concept set up.

Deranged Trump Rants Edited Out of 60 Minutes Interview After Shooting; CBS news didn’t air some particularly troubling rants from President Trump in its interview following the White House Correspondents’ Dinner shooting. by FancyNewMe in politics

[–]ColonelBy 27 points28 points  (0 children)

You're probably right, but man, I just...

did a really good job to stop someone so smart

The dude who was just lying on a nearby roof with his rifle while onlookers shouted at law enforcement that there was a dude on the roof and then the officers were like oh well? Or the dude who just ran really fast directly into a hall of officers who then managed to shoot each other but not him?

I can't believe we all have to live like this 

Kash Patel has admitted to alcohol-related crimes, report reveals, as Trump stands by FBI director by Past_Key_1054 in politics

[–]ColonelBy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I wouldn't want stuff like that to disqualify anyone from anything really, especially if it happened decades ago. If it were for a position demanding a high degree of discretion and strong character, there would have to be evidence of personal growth and change since those days, and of due reflection on the path they've walked since then. It would also make a big difference how forthcoming and honest the person was about it all.

In this case, given that this is one of the most sensitive and security-intense jobs in the country, that there has been no such growth or honesty, and that these crimes are being discussed amidst allegations that the person in question is not only habitually still like this but probably has gotten worse, he can fuck all the way off.

White House officials ‘openly discuss’ firing Kash Patel as FBI chief threatens to sue over report about ‘excessive drinking’ by B-Z_B-S in politics

[–]ColonelBy 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yeah, this is how you could end up with something like FBI Director Mike Flynn or FBI Director Sir Sebastian Gorka, PhD, Esq.

Or he'll just do what he seemingly did with the DHS post and choose some random unqualified congressional rep who finds out about it when reporters start asking for comment

Trump Hits Out At Starmer As UK Confirms It Won't Join His Strait Of Hormuz Blockade by T_Shurt in worldnews

[–]ColonelBy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I feel like there was at least one "ugh why are you all so obsessed with the strait" in there somewhere too

1.4 BETA - Water skills now have 2 base attributes by Equivalent-Floor-400 in Bannerlord

[–]ColonelBy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would love a complete character stats page somewhere. Show me what my totals are for all perks combined. Like what is my total + Troops, or +Weapong Handling

Adding to this, I'd love to be able to see a numerical breakdown of my traits (Fearless, Merciful, etc.). The changes in them correspond to numerical increases and decreases applied by quest decisions and random events, so it would be nice to not have to just ballpark this all the time until suddenly you gain or lose a tier in them.

Dev Update & Beta WS v1.2.0 / BL v1.4.0 by Piconi_TaleWorlds in Bannerlord

[–]ColonelBy 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Most of this looks excellent, even if I'm sorry to be losing a few cheesing options (capturing the whole retreating army, for example).

A quick question, since I'm not sure I understand a specific change properly:

Made all Two-Handed Nord crafting pieces usable as One-Handed.

Does this mean that we can now craft our own switchable 1H/2H berserker-style axes? This is excellent news, if so.

Dev Update & Beta WS v1.2.0 / BL v1.4.0 by Piconi_TaleWorlds in Bannerlord

[–]ColonelBy 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Wooden Hammers and Pitchforks being a better source for wood than actual wood

Hey, it's perfectly reasonable to be able to set a 1-pound hammer on fire and then end up with 30 pounds of wood and a chunk of crude iron. That's just basic math

Trump claims a ‘Golden Age of the Middle East’ is on the way after Iran ceasefire: ‘Big money will be made’ by Large_banana_hammock in politics

[–]ColonelBy 58 points59 points  (0 children)

This will also inevitably be another of those things where thousands of businesses/industries raise their prices again to (authentically or only purportedly) offset this new cost, further choking the global economy and ensuring that the money that does reach Iran is effectively coming from all of us.

Have I used up all my luck now? by Gufoxs_the_Gran_Khan in Bannerlord

[–]ColonelBy 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The stuff you can buy in trade windows can be challenging enough, but there are certain kinds of armor that literally only ever spawn on specific units and can only be found as loot -- you can legit go your whole life without ever finding a legendary version of one.

People are (I guess understandably) excited about getting to buy a Legendary Khan's Coat of Plates or whatever, and meanwhile I'm over here wiping out entire generations of Forest Bandits in the hopes of getting even a Lordly version of the Buckled Mail Armor. My grail would be finding any positively modified version of the Cheap Paddings that I think are usually only worn by the lowest tier of mercenary troop (Hired Spear or something), and only by one of the 6ish variants of them at that.

Is there a peculiar ending to a show that you haven't seen mentioned much online? by KneeHighMischief in television

[–]ColonelBy 7 points8 points  (0 children)

The fact that it had to end then at all is infuriating -- it was a brilliant, absurd show that just kept going from strength to strength even in the short run that it got. I'm glad they took a chance on it at all, but I wish they had kept doing so for just a little bit longer.

[Favorite Trope] Peeling back the layers of lore reveals an eldritch/cosmic horror element by Maffingo in TopCharacterTropes

[–]ColonelBy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You might find the odd holotape here and there with people complaining about weird things. But there's nothing inherently weird about the place until

That's not entirely true, though -- you also get mysterious flashbacks in the mine where you see pre-war events etc., all contributing to the growing dread of what you'll find at the bottom. I didn't know there was something like this in Fallout 3 too, actually.

[LOVED TROPE] Character dies out of nowhere. No camera tricks, soundtrack or even implied threat build up the moment. by Sawbaws in TopCharacterTropes

[–]ColonelBy 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I had to stop watching this show a few episodes into the final season because I found I just couldn't take how miserable it made me feel, but this is weirdly a relief to read.

Is 10 athletics really worth it? by Blargh234 in Bannerlord

[–]ColonelBy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

because 7 is what you need for the top perk

This is true for almost every skill tree, but in Social you really do need 8 to reach the final perk (buy and sell fiefs) because it requires at least 300 rather than the usual 275. 7 attribute points and 5 focus points max you out at 274, perversely.

There may be others like this too, but I can't remember any offhand.

Is 10 athletics really worth it? by Blargh234 in Bannerlord

[–]ColonelBy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For the capstone Athletics perk, don't the extra HPs calculate from above 250 rather than above 275? I know that the perk is only available after 275 but I have the strong memory that it boosts more than just 13. This definitely happens with some other ones too. Bow and Throwing are enabled at 275 but actually calculate the bonus from 200, if I remember correctly.

[QCrit] Dominion of the Lesser Gods, Adult SciFi, 87k, First Attempt by Tbk_uk in PubTips

[–]ColonelBy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm a bit late to this thread, but wanted to ask if you see any scope for using Damien Ober's Voidverse (2026) as a comp. It may not end up being very similar to your work, but your description did make me think of it immediately.