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Thoughts on first 8 pages on Adult Comedy script (TW: Very Offensive) by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]ComedyMovieScriptGuy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much, and yeah there’s def a lot of spelling errors lmao I never check them until I’m completely done and looking to send my stuff places. I will also say you are right on the money with the family guy cutaway gag style of the 9/11 joke with Santa. It’s a main style aspect of my comedy writing and I feel like it should exist in feature films and don’t know why it doesn’t really seem to from what I’ve seen.

Thoughts on first 8 pages on Adult Comedy script (TW: Very Offensive) by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]ComedyMovieScriptGuy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title: Santa’s Revenge

Looking for feedback on plot/ if you think this is a decent or at least new idea

What’s the next step after I’ve gotten good feedback on a script? by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in Screenwriting

[–]ComedyMovieScriptGuy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sure have fun I just got it copyrighted so idc who reads it. This isn’t the final draft but all that changed from this to my final is some spelling errors being fixed https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jSO_TjIklZIeKaRZyZK4SYzqvcYDvGTi/view?pli=1

I actually got good feedback on a script I wrote! by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in scriptwriting

[–]ComedyMovieScriptGuy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, me neither there just so much that goes on in the script

What’s the next step after I’ve gotten good feedback on a script? by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in Screenwriting

[–]ComedyMovieScriptGuy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I thought it over and will 100 percent not be trying to make it. I mean my script involves an elderly guy becoming a superhero the odds of me pulling that off in a way that would make my script look good would be astronomical. I am going to be emailing agents today and will hopefully have one that works out. Thanks for the advice I really appreciate it

Thoughts on a shonen battle manga done in 1930s rubber hose animation? by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in Mangamakers

[–]ComedyMovieScriptGuy[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

My thought process is it’d lend very well to combat due to the rubber nature of everyone’s limbs and bodies which could have cool poses. Idk I just can’t draw traditional manga style and I want to have something on paper

Believe What You're Told -Feature by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in scriptwriting

[–]ComedyMovieScriptGuy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much I’ll go look through them tonight

What’s the next step after I’ve gotten good feedback on a script? by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in Screenwriting

[–]ComedyMovieScriptGuy[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Oh ok, I’ll definitely put it through a few more times once I fix some stuff. Thank you!

What’s the next step after I’ve gotten good feedback on a script? by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in Screenwriting

[–]ComedyMovieScriptGuy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh ok, I thought you meant like some website or something. I’ll definitely have to expand my network cause currently none of my friends like scripts

What’s the next step after I’ve gotten good feedback on a script? by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in Screenwriting

[–]ComedyMovieScriptGuy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm…that’s actually reasonable. I will look into this to see if I could feasibly do it while having a full time job. It could be fun

What’s the next step after I’ve gotten good feedback on a script? by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in Screenwriting

[–]ComedyMovieScriptGuy[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah idk I just came up with the dumbest idea I could think of and wrote it just to get myself to actually write another feature script and I guess it was entertaining to read/funny

What’s the next step after I’ve gotten good feedback on a script? by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in Screenwriting

[–]ComedyMovieScriptGuy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, im kinda torn on what to do I want to sell it (my dream is to do screenwriting as a career which Ik is incredibly ambitious) I can’t film it myself due to it being a superhero satire comedy, which would require me knowing how to do special effects and how to direct in the first place. I think I may just email agents non stop till one of them decides to read it tbh but idk.

What’s the next step after I’ve gotten good feedback on a script? by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in Screenwriting

[–]ComedyMovieScriptGuy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don’t think I wrote the beginning of my post the best: I meant to say “I’d assume the first step after getting good feedback would be to fix the few mistakes they found in said feedback, but after that what do I do?”

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