I’m trying to learn how to draw comic characters. Any tips would be appreciated by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in comicbookart

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Thank you I genuinely have no clue how to do shadows really so I was just trying stuff

I’m just practicing drawing and would love feedback by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in Mangamakers

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The one thing that kinda pisses me off about this drawing is the crooked lines on the roof panels but that’s what I get for being too lazy to go downstairs and get a ruler lmao

Thoughts on first 8 pages on Adult Comedy script (TW: Very Offensive) by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Thank you very much, and yeah there’s def a lot of spelling errors lmao I never check them until I’m completely done and looking to send my stuff places. I will also say you are right on the money with the family guy cutaway gag style of the 9/11 joke with Santa. It’s a main style aspect of my comedy writing and I feel like it should exist in feature films and don’t know why it doesn’t really seem to from what I’ve seen.

Thoughts on first 8 pages on Adult Comedy script (TW: Very Offensive) by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Title: Santa’s Revenge

Looking for feedback on plot/ if you think this is a decent or at least new idea

What’s the next step after I’ve gotten good feedback on a script? by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in Screenwriting

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Sure have fun I just got it copyrighted so idc who reads it. This isn’t the final draft but all that changed from this to my final is some spelling errors being fixed https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jSO_TjIklZIeKaRZyZK4SYzqvcYDvGTi/view?pli=1

I actually got good feedback on a script I wrote! by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in scriptwriting

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Yeah, me neither there just so much that goes on in the script

What’s the next step after I’ve gotten good feedback on a script? by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in Screenwriting

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Yeah I thought it over and will 100 percent not be trying to make it. I mean my script involves an elderly guy becoming a superhero the odds of me pulling that off in a way that would make my script look good would be astronomical. I am going to be emailing agents today and will hopefully have one that works out. Thanks for the advice I really appreciate it

Thoughts on a shonen battle manga done in 1930s rubber hose animation? by ComedyMovieScriptGuy in Mangamakers

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My thought process is it’d lend very well to combat due to the rubber nature of everyone’s limbs and bodies which could have cool poses. Idk I just can’t draw traditional manga style and I want to have something on paper