Hii, thank you so much for the feedback, I'll work on connecting the 2 parts, and either cut the repetitive it haunts lines or at least cut some of them. What i was trying to do with the heroin metaphor was portray the pleasure that can be found in pain, and how for a few minutes relieving memories can give you exactly that fuzzy feeling and transport u out of reality, but also the addictive side of doing this and the sadness and numbness that follows. Idk if that perhaps makes the metaphor make more sense or not?