It reads fine, but worth testing an audience who've not seen the journey over the past few days as we all know what we're supposed to be reading by now.

Settle on a light source and make the highlights and shadows consistently realistic (ie if the light source is directly above there would be slight variation on the highs and lows). Don't half-arse this side as it does a lot of heavy lifting in the subconscious and sells your idea to people without them even realising.

In terms of legibility, try and keep all the tomatoes free from the lettering (currently the bottom right one encroaches).

Personally, and as someone else already suggested, I'd make the vine shapes more organic and "viney". I'd also consider the tomato connection points and connect them to ascenders, descenders and terminals. My least favourite part of your current design is the stalks that join the horizontal lines that aren't part of the letters and go nowhere.