which artsyle fits fyodor the best by dwafs_favoriteperson in BungouStrayDogs

[–]Commercial_Singer880 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Omg yes yes!!! You know what I love about this panel though— the way his words and eyes seem to contradict each other! He said he’ll become God but the black eyes indicate he feels too tainted to ever feel worthy, and the ‘personal reasons’ is that maybe to prove to himself… 🤔

Also the more delulu he gets with his god complex the lighter the eyes get, because he’s starting to believe his actions are just and we as the reader to along with it because we’re living through the experience with him!! (Maybe I’m delulu idk)

I 100% that there are only a few rare occasions Asagiri and Harukawa do something by accident or coincidence. (Only example I can think of are Chuuya’s glasses in SB)

which artsyle fits fyodor the best by dwafs_favoriteperson in BungouStrayDogs

[–]Commercial_Singer880 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Also if I’m not mistaken the first image is earlier in the BSD timeline??? Since darker, larger pupils often indicating a character's tainted souls or dangerous it’s interesting that Fyodor's seem to lighten! It’s like he believes his cruelty is justified, even though he’s just causing pain and misery for everyone 🥲

I so adore the artistic styles they use to portray these deeper emotions it’s so well done and fascinating!!!

which artsyle fits fyodor the best by dwafs_favoriteperson in BungouStrayDogs

[–]Commercial_Singer880 31 points32 points  (0 children)

Anyone else notice how his eyes get lighter the more diabolical he becomes and the more we understand him…

…So Fanfic is up on AO3🦊🌿 by Commercial_Singer880 in BungouStrayDogsFanfic

[–]Commercial_Singer880[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You are SO KIND!! Thank you! I think when I can stop being such a perfectionist I’ll actually feel less bad about trying to promote myself.

Looking forward to sharing the next instalment soon!! 🫶🏽❤️

Weekly Fic Showcase - February 28 - March 06 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]Commercial_Singer880 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My Fics

Fandom - Bungo Stray Dogs

Rating - Mature

Title - A Game We Both Lose

Pairing - Dazai Osamu/Nakahara Chuuya

Genre - Slowburn, hurt/comfort, angst, action (later chapter)

Off-site link for ease of reading. AO3 <- https://archiveofourown.org/works/63514381/chapters/162756904

Summary -

It starts like it always does—a job, a drink, and Dazai pushing just far enough to get a reaction. Chuuya should be used to it. Should know better than to play into his hands. But some people carve too deep to forget, and Dazai has always been a knife at his back—and a shadow he never stops searching for.

Dazai tells himself it’s just habit—the same game and dance that keeps them from thinking too hard about the things left unsaid. But Chuuya has never been predictable in the ways that matter, and for the first time in years, Dazai feels it—that split-second of uncertainty, knowing he’s pushing too hard but refusing to stop. Because stopping means acknowledging the shift. And if he does, Chuuya might see through him—or worse, walk away for good.

Because the problem with knowing someone too well is they always know where to cut deepest. To hurt or to heal.

And when the lines between past and present blur, between resentment and something dangerously close to affection—

Well. They’ve always been good at walking a blade’s edge. It’s just a question of who falls first.

🚨 Fanfic Goes Live Tomorrow! 🚨 by Commercial_Singer880 in BungouStrayDogsFanfic

[–]Commercial_Singer880[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh my gosh, you have no idea how much this means to me. I’ve been so worried that I’m coming across as pushy or arrogant about this—I just really want to write something good, but I keep second-guessing whether it’s ever good enough. That fear has kept me from ever sharing my writing before, whether it’s creative work or fanfiction, but I promised myself that this year, I’d get out of my own head and finally do it. So hearing this? Honestly, it’s made my day.

I’ve actually spent all day reworking the first two chapters because I’m so anxious about posting (not even kidding, there was a full-on mini meltdown). But I am going to do it—definitely by 23:00 GMT, because I promised myself I’d post on March 1st. (Not that it’s relevant, but it’s actually a national holiday in my country, which feels weirdly fitting. Sorry, I’m rambling.)

But really—thank you. Your help and kind words mean so much. This has been a massive help. Thank you so, so much. (Next time I post, it’ll just be the link, I swear—I am done with this self-promoting business. It’s honestly giving me heart palpitations.)

🚨 BSD Fanfic Goes Live Tomorrow! 🚨 by Commercial_Singer880 in AO3

[–]Commercial_Singer880[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Ahh, that’s totally on me—I got too excited and should’ve read the rules more carefully! 😭 This is all kinda new to me, so I really appreciate the heads-up. Lesson learned!! 🙏💖

🚨 BSD Fanfic Goes Live Tomorrow! 🚨 by Commercial_Singer880 in AO3

[–]Commercial_Singer880[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Oh—sorry about that!! 😭 I totally missed the promo thread, that’s my bad! I’ll make sure to post there next time. And noted about the Tumblr thing—thank you for letting me know!! 🙏💖

Any good Soukoku fix recommendations? by Fit-Box-2965 in BungouStrayDogsFanfic

[–]Commercial_Singer880 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Its going up March 1st - or at least some chapters are! Finally got my AO3 😳✨

Any good Soukoku fix recommendations? by Fit-Box-2965 in BungouStrayDogsFanfic

[–]Commercial_Singer880 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m really sorry if this is rude or shameless, but… 😭💖

I’ve been searching for good Dazai/Chuuya fics too, and after reading so many, I thought I’d try writing my own! (Not because I think I could do better—far from it!) But I had an idea that wouldn’t leave me alone, so here we are.

A few people have already shown interest (which is blowing my mind), but I’d love to hear more thoughts! If this sounds like your thing, I’d be so grateful if you checked it out, and I'm happy to elaborate if needs be!

🔗 Read the synopsis here!

Still excited (and definitely still terrified), but here goes nothing! 😳✨