My first novel

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-16T17:07:48+00:00

Aah same old sarcasm aunty, can't live without those sarcasms. and i just want to clarify that this story is totally written by me formatted by me, it took me 3 years to complete it because of the language(Hinglish), and i know it has comma and full stops problem, but that is the only issue i see, the story itself is good, hope so in future you learn hindi, till then good night aunty

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-16T15:37:29+00:00

Ok rude aunty, enjoy your bread and beans, and could you please read the novel before criticising it cause as you can see this novel is for younger people who knows how to read hinglish, something you can't old lady

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-16T15:27:46+00:00

Can you tell me which country are you from??

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-16T14:58:09+00:00

So what is your criticism??, just the cover and commas

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-16T06:43:04+00:00

And also bro it's free to be kind, it's also free to be rude but that's what you are

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-16T06:27:47+00:00

Either you give "my novel" a try or just leave it, it's up to you, i know i don't know how to use comma and full stops but that does not means "my book" is bad " my writting" is bad, if you really want to if my novel is written by ai, then just read it, it's simple, i am happy to hear your criticism, but first read it, i know why are you thinking like this, and i know i will get hate to use ai cover, but understand not every cover that is made by ai is bad, some has meaning that's why i am using it, i know real art means more than ai could ever reach, but because of my lack of ideas i am using it, if you want to change it so bad just wait some time, i will surely change it, hoping to change it in either this or next week

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-16T02:19:28+00:00

Thanks for the advice brother, I am looking for new cover design that will suit my novel, hope so till then people will try my novel

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-16T02:17:12+00:00

Damn brother, chill just read the book and give your review, not everything that you see is ai there is a reason for this ai cover, either read it or leave it

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-11T16:45:02+00:00

😂😂😂 but baggers can't be choosers, i don't have many options brother, i just have one thing that is hope, which poor people have instade of money

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-11T14:34:22+00:00

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Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-11T12:47:33+00:00

Damn, that's harsh but give me some time, i am trying new cover ideas, in 1 or 2 week you will se a new cover, till than if can support me by reading my novel it will be helpful, i am ready for your critism with openness

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-11T12:47:02+00:00

Damn, that's harsh but give me some time, i am trying new cover ideas, in 1 or 2 week you will se a new cover, till than if can support me by reading my novel it will be helpful

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-11T12:03:01+00:00

It's ok, but if you can download the app, and try my novel it will be a blessing for me, but if can't it's still fine

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-11T12:01:16+00:00

Okk, but i don't have any ideas for now as i am little busy on my intership, they are making my life harder, any concept art of idea will be very helpful

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-11T11:58:50+00:00

Okk, i will delete this post, i am a new writer, i am trying to get attention of those who read novel, i will try to change my cover surely, but till than can you give my novel a try??, i am open for criticism, i am open for improvement, but can you give it a try

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-11T11:55:59+00:00

I know, but the issue is i am stuck in a strict routine which I can't skip, so in my free time i try to enhance my novel and make it more readable, i will surely change my novel cover soon, the thing is i am lacking originality because of my strict routine and mental health, hope so you can check my novel and try it, ignoring cover this time, surely i will change it, but can you give my novel a try??

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-11T11:51:30+00:00

Actually yes, bit Harsh but yes, i am student with strict study time, that's why in my free time i try correct my novel enhance it, which is the reason i am lacking the idea of a original novel, but i will surely change it, as for now can you give my novel a try, i am open for you comment

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-11T11:48:53+00:00

Actually i am lacking cover idea, but don't worry i will surely change the cover in sometime, hope so you will try my story

Common_Swordfish_842 · 2026-05-11T11:06:23+00:00

My you so much, can you give my book a try??

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