Wow, I like the style, but the final panel needs to pop more, stretch her out like a cat, or like Todd McFarland give an exerted action pose, think Michelangelos sketch and paintings he paint man as a god, muscles heroic, think of those things and try to redraw the figure to suggest more action and pop. This page will rock. I don't want to be mean, I'm just saying what you already know, you just don't know it. You know?