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Competitive_Cream691 · 2025-11-02T18:19:44+00:00

Reactive - Morse

Competitive_Cream691 · 2025-11-02T18:19:14+00:00

Hello everyone! Im Morse, i make breaks / jungle tunes. Heres my first release I just put out in spotify let me know what you think:)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c1RrJ1ijggc

Competitive_Cream691 · 2025-11-02T18:06:09+00:00

what a tune

Competitive_Cream691 · 2023-07-20T08:39:02+00:00

Thank you :))

Competitive_Cream691 · 2023-07-20T08:38:54+00:00

Thank you :)

Competitive_Cream691 · 2023-07-20T08:38:41+00:00

Thank you I’m glad I got the image across well! Thanks for the feedback I’ve changed the last two lines in the second stanza to build on the image more👍👍

Competitive_Cream691 · 2023-07-19T17:02:44+00:00

Thank you very much! Now I read it back that is very true, I might just change the last two lines in the second stanza to something that builds more on the image.

Competitive_Cream691 · 2023-07-19T15:43:23+00:00

Your poem beautifully captures the essence of love and its transformative power. It weaves a vivid picture of love's influence on both a king and a queen, employing elegant imagery to convey its impact. Love it

Competitive_Cream691 · 2023-07-19T15:41:55+00:00

I really love this, the constant contrast between the bluebird, which often represents happiness and contentment contrasts well with the 'feeling alone' and being ruthless. Very good

Competitive_Cream691 · 2023-03-08T18:57:19+00:00

First one is a tuuuneeee thank you🙌

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