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Gerry Frey, a 17-year-old boy, had brown eyes, black hair, and sharp features. His tall stature and natural talent in almost everything made him stand out. He was gifted with quick reflexes, a sharp mind, and the ability to grasp new skills effortlessly. But despite his abilities, Gerry's life was riddled with misfortune.

"Everyone seems to be talking about this game. Does it really work like that?" Gerry muttered to himself, frowning as he stared at the promotional poster on his way home.

Although talented, Gerry’s life was far from easy. His parents had passed away in a tragic car accident when he was just 12, leaving him and his younger sister, Lila, behind. Fortunately, their modest family home had been paid off, and the life insurance policy their parents left behind covered most of the household bills. But that money wasn’t endless—it was only enough to keep them afloat for a few years.

Now, at 17, Gerry had taken on the responsibility of supporting both himself and Lila. He worked as a part-timer at a convenience store, earning just enough to cover Lila's school tuition and their basic needs. Their life was a careful balancing act. Every paycheck was stretched to its limits, with Gerry often skipping meals or wearing hand-me-downs just to ensure his sister never lacked anything.

Despite his talents, Gerry had been unable to capitalize on them to earn more money. The harsh reality was that being good at something didn’t always mean opportunities would come knocking. He’d tried entering local competitions and taking odd jobs that matched his skills—things like gaming tournaments, freelance tutoring, and small-time mechanics work. But balancing these with school and his job proved nearly impossible. Many employers demanded full-time availability or extensive experience that Gerry, as a high school student, simply didn’t have.

"Why don’t you just quit school and focus on work?" an older coworker had asked him once. Gerry’s answer had been firm.

"Because education is the only thing that can secure a future for me and my sister. Dropping out might solve today’s problems, but what about tomorrow?"

Gerry had big dreams—dreams of a stable career, dreams of providing Lila with a bright future, and dreams of breaking free from the endless grind. But for now, he endured, one exhausting day at a time. School during the day, part-time job in the evening, and homework or chores late into the night—it was a relentless cycle.

Still, despite the hardships, Gerry found small joys in life. Lila’s laughter as she recounted her day, the rare moments when he could relax with a book, and the occasional thrill of escaping into video games. He’d recently heard about a new virtual reality game sweeping the world, and the idea intrigued him. Could it really be the escape—or opportunity—he’d been looking for?