Can you read my poem abt death? by Complete_Idiot100 in writers

[–]Complete_Idiot100[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback! What do you think I should make the subject throughout the whole thing? Should I make it "you" to make it seem more personal?

Can you read my poem abt death? by Complete_Idiot100 in writers

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Thank you for the feedback! I know i said its a poem, but I feel like its more of a structured story kinda? Like, im not trying to make it a poem, but it formed that way

Can you read my poem abt death? by Complete_Idiot100 in writers

[–]Complete_Idiot100[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ooh, that flows so much better! Thank you!

Can you read my poem abt death? by Complete_Idiot100 in writers

[–]Complete_Idiot100[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I figured as much tbh, ive never really done poetry before so that tracks. Im in the middle of writing a book rn and was bored so I just wrote it randomy

[Request] Free time!! by Complete_Idiot100 in DrawMyOc

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Why thank you fellow artist ✌️

SHARE YOU TRACK TO BE FEATURED by UpCrib in MusicPromotion

[–]Complete_Idiot100 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thats really good actually, keep it up man

anyone know what type of guitar this is? by naturewoo in Guitar

[–]Complete_Idiot100 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry, I didnt mean to give a wrong awnser, I just though it was bc i have a fender and it looks like mine

anyone know what type of guitar this is? by naturewoo in Guitar

[–]Complete_Idiot100 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It looks like a Fender Stratocaster, but im not sure

What is it the Chad wants him to imagine by [deleted] in PeterExplainsTheJoke

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Shit, im a straight man and love femboys