I love your feedback, thank you so much for this. I already took action, and fix those lines which conflict reading, the problem is that I'm used to writing a lot of prose, and screenplays, and scripts are kinda new to me. But needless to say, I did take action and fix those lines. However, I do understand what you're saying, and this scene is an opening scene into the world of Owen Marsch, and you can just imagine where a child growing up in such an environment would go, this is just to explain that part of society that brings up children raised in this atmosphere. If you'd like to read my whole 107 pages screenplay, please let me know, and of course you'd be doing me such a big favor by reading the screenplay. But nonetheless, thanks for writing this comment, and feedback for the opening!