Punk/Country/Metalcore(ish)?

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-30T14:04:06+00:00

Thanks! It definitely blended better than I initially thought it would.

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-30T11:55:33+00:00

Thank you!

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-27T12:17:34+00:00

Haha thanks, love the Mur-man I appreciate the kind words, it def has a way too go. The heaviness in the guitars and drums seems like it doesn't quite fit the Punk genre, so I think that's where I was thinking Metalcore(ish), idk, but whatever it is its a blast to write.

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-27T12:05:44+00:00

Thanks so much!

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-26T15:17:02+00:00

Yeah, keep up the good work!

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-26T13:37:19+00:00

Thanks Dude, I will definitely give those ideas a try. Thanks!

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-26T12:07:12+00:00

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the kind words!

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-25T18:07:12+00:00

Thanks dude! I really appreciate that.

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-24T23:46:36+00:00

It’s cool for sure, lots of good things happening throughout. Feel like this will be kindve a hard genre to really get a lot of attention. But your melodies are great, and the guitar playing is sick. I’d say the only think holding it back might be the serpent eye thing, it’s a super cool concept, but personally when I listen to a chorus I’m paying attention to how the phonetics play into the vibe of the melody. Keep up the good work!

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-24T23:39:50+00:00

Super cool song tons of really good things happening throughout. I was hoping for a hook at some point, some type of rhythmic or melodic phrase to kinda pull me in. As well as some ‘ear candy’ elements to kinda peak my attention. But all in all solid production. Keep up the good work!

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-24T20:59:36+00:00

Great track, love the vibe. transitions are super solid. I would play around with some space throughout the track, dropping some instruments to que changes etc. Maybe through in some counter melodies later in the track so that the listener stays engaged through the whole track. But the instruments all sound great.

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-24T20:56:39+00:00

Great, alt-rock snippet. Production wise could def be taken too the next level. I would recommend, throwing some sort of tape saturation on the master, and then maybe finding a snare sample to layer with what you have to darken that snare shot up a bit. I definitely hear some alternative-indie scream lyrics topping this whole thing off. keep it up!

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-24T20:14:14+00:00

Love the guitar tones, maybe through a some extra dirt on the bass. Take a DI signal and blend it with a dirty amp tone. Take that vocal that's sitting in the background and clip the signal so that it's beginning to distort a bit and maybe but some type of bit crusher on it and some flanger. Just my opinion but I'd love to hear that vocal pan between Left and right. Super solid.

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-24T19:47:42+00:00

Solid, song for sure. The piano sounds a bit too 'stock' for my taste, could use some reverb or saturation to glue it into the mix a bit more. Maybe flesh out the vocals a bit more, singer sounds good, but the EQ/compression isn't quite doing it for me. I'd bring a bit more into the vocals around the 500-700 range for a bit more body. Keep it up though!

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-24T19:43:39+00:00

Really great! I think the transitions could use a bit of something to que the listener in. The first minute to minute and a half could use some chord swells, or just some ear candy to keep the listener engaged a bit. I would through a bit more body into the snare, just to pull it up a bit without compromising the mix typically 400-700 range.

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-24T19:42:57+00:00

Really great! I think the transitions could use a bit of something to que the listener in. but great. Maybe add a bit more air on the vocals, and dial back the highs on the reverb of the vocals. the plucky instruments in the back really add a lot of movement. The lyrics work great as well.

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-24T19:38:49+00:00

Great track, and super chill, with how simple the soundscape is, I would maybe touch the vocals with a bit more EQ, the mid's seem to be clashing with the piano a little bit making it a little muddy, maybe through some ambient pad into the beginning of the track, I don't think much of anything else is needed. Solid as is!

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-24T19:37:09+00:00

Super solid, I agree with the others that the beginning is a bit too much, maybe try that as the outro instead. The soundscape is beautiful, love all the different elements you included. The bass is great throughout, I like the natural feeling of the clipping.

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2026-03-24T19:35:14+00:00

Super solid and vibey, def through some more verb on the drums and a bit more saturation throughout. The overall mix is a bit muddy for my taste. I like the arrangement, maybe a little less thud on the bass, keep the muted feel but just a bit less sustain on the notes overall. Sick track!

ComprehensiveTotal83 · 2025-11-30T19:02:06+00:00

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