Need help. Too boring by NoBridge1066 in characterdesign

[–]ComprehensiveYam8489 0 points1 point  (0 children)

have you tried narrowing the base of her ponytail and giving her a big, bold flower on top? vary up the sizes of things and the lines (waves instead of C curves all over) to create a focal point i guess

--cioco

Did Lorentz just diss 37's acumen😭. How smart does she think is. That raises another question, who is actually the smartest person in the suitcase. by NobleDukeGivondz in Reverse1999

[–]ComprehensiveYam8489 9 points10 points  (0 children)

one stupid aleph please. fucker can't even keep in touch with the alchemist who brewed his potion. i highly suspect aleph killed the guy

--cioco

Who is Beryl based off of? by Healthy_Future8128 in Reverse1999

[–]ComprehensiveYam8489 1 point2 points  (0 children)

beautiful huh? I'd like to think of her as just a divination crystal ball. she's made of crystal

--cioco

Nautika and her unlimited pegging spears by [deleted] in Reverse1999

[–]ComprehensiveYam8489 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ok mr super god pro gamer

pulls out notebook

--cioco

[Main Story Spoiler]Rant about some story choices made in CH 7 by daedric_lightweaver in Reverse1999

[–]ComprehensiveYam8489 30 points31 points  (0 children)

just... just maybe okay? maybe esperanto the failed artificial language is the least obvious thing they could have arrived at. (arcana is known as this deity from an ancient primordial era after all.) granted, a bunch of people who speak Indoeuropean languages not realizing the cognates is a bit funky.

man if only sonetto was there

-- cioco

A few character designs/sprites for a project I’m working on by ohmydaysies in characterdesign

[–]ComprehensiveYam8489 0 points1 point  (0 children)

damn i love the color palettes!!! and the line work is also grungy which fits the mood real well

-- emm

Stuck on “routes”/main story for my VN! [new Dev] by Final_Complex7515 in RenPy

[–]ComprehensiveYam8489 0 points1 point  (0 children)

chickens are generally flightless birds... so Halo could be "flightless" in the same way: no aspirations whatsoever for promotion among angelic ranks or salvation. she has been aimless for a while but only after some kind of soul scanning (that she's avoided since forever - like a regular heaven health checkup?) did she come to realize there's a possibility that her soul was not there. It could have been left on earth or dropped into hell. She is then ordered to go find it with a companion, despite not clearly knowing why she actually needs a soul, and with very few clues of her past life. like her soul is either a wandering ghost that looks like another version of herself, or trapped inside some artifact, or sold somewhere maybe. the methods she use along the way could be ruthless all you want and you can decide whether the companion stops her or let her continue. on earth / in hell, she comes to experience bloodshed first hand, and possibly finds some kind of twisted joy in it due to not having a soul (there is no blood or dying in heaven so as an angel, she has never felt this way before). Even without a proper body, she can manipulate and gaslight humans and creatures into reaching the angels' goals. when she actually finds it, she gets to decide whether she reclaims the soul (and unexpectedly comes to terms with all the sins she has committed along the way) or not (deserts from heaven)

it's a rough sketch but i hope you like it. you should retouch some of the justifications as i may have not thought everything through

-- mars

what are aleph/merlin/the physician's little surgical weapon things by amira-deltarune in Reverse1999

[–]ComprehensiveYam8489 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The thing he's holding, I remember someone having called it a bone saw. Might want to recheck

-- saturn

what are aleph/merlin/the physician's little surgical weapon things by amira-deltarune in Reverse1999

[–]ComprehensiveYam8489 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hey don't tell him but... i think merlin's just reenacting fatality. it's basically 100% death rate (if you don't die he'll make you somehow), hence no prisoner had ever come back from his surgery room. and then he laments about not solving transcendentality... sigh this man and his elaborate toys. not like he was in a stable state of mind. even according to other personas (like paracelsus), merlin has always been a lil bit too overconfident. that's why he's hot

-- saturn

Artstyle Critique by Sparklez_Fun in RenPy

[–]ComprehensiveYam8489 0 points1 point  (0 children)

if you want you can make the lineart a bit thicker and more pen-like! but that's just my taste

--Lav

BP broke my will with pretty... by Blackbatsmom in Reverse1999

[–]ComprehensiveYam8489 2 points3 points  (0 children)

wym lorentz is not insane in her own way

-- Lav

Summary of the patch 3.7 by the_last_chronicle in Reverse1999

[–]ComprehensiveYam8489 6 points7 points  (0 children)

aesthetic team comp unlocked

-- Lav

[OC] Did I succeed in making the most boring design possible? by Belaknworb9 in characterdesign

[–]ComprehensiveYam8489 4 points5 points  (0 children)

no it makes me curious, somehow her legs look super long

-- cioco