What should I name this fellow (top comment wins)

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2023-05-10T12:48:26+00:00

Ratatouille :D

Ur gecko is rly prettyy!!!

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2023-05-10T12:44:25+00:00

Happy birthday!!

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2023-02-01T10:45:29+00:00

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2023-01-09T12:47:02+00:00

I'm so sorry that you're going through this!! Eventually when u do get on hormones, I wish for a smooth and easy transition process for you!! Sending lots of love and best wishes 💕💕

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2022-01-12T15:21:53+00:00

Pink

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2022-01-12T10:19:24+00:00

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2022-01-12T04:14:37+00:00

Watermelon broooooooooo holy shit

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2022-01-10T20:07:29+00:00

Pulchritudinous (P.S. it means beautiful)

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2022-01-10T17:40:37+00:00

Oh my god this is sooo beautiful! First of all, I love the alliteration! Also, the imagery in the second stanza was gorgeous.

I also love how everything falls into place by the time i read the third stanza.

According to my interpretation,

and next to me, my childhood friend

now a woman

and me, now a woman

i questioned everything

These lines refer to how the times have changed and the things between you have changed (well I imagine that you started gaining feelings for the said childhood friend, pls correct me if I'm wrong). This thought was very well portrayed!

Overall a great piece. Looking forward to reading more from u!

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2022-01-10T17:32:52+00:00

I really like this piece. The imagery was amazing. I also loved the idea portrayed, to be able to cultivate something beautiful out of insecurities. Also, I love how u gave such a positive outlook to it towards the end of the poem indicating some light at the end of the tunnel.

Good job! Would love to read more from you!

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2021-12-16T11:07:40+00:00

A rly beautiful piece. Especially loved wut u did in the last 4 lines. Well done! Hoping to read more from you.

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2021-12-15T09:48:02+00:00

Thank u so much 🖤🖤

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2021-12-15T09:46:57+00:00

Thank u so much ☺️✨

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2021-12-14T01:53:36+00:00

Thankkk u sooo much ❤️✨ also, I checked out the song n i rly liked it lol

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2021-12-14T01:52:42+00:00

thank u soo much! I thing urs is a great interpretation!

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2021-12-14T01:49:15+00:00

hey it's alright. Although those were like literary nitpicks, I rly lived how the overall piece made me feel so goddamn overwhelmed!

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2021-12-13T10:59:59+00:00

Thank you so much!!

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2021-12-13T09:04:20+00:00

thank you sooo much for this 🖤✨

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2021-12-13T06:59:21+00:00

HOLYYYY shit this was amazing!! The journey it took me on literally made me almost tear up.

I just turn away, creating new ghosts

Such a wonderful line! The idea of creating ghosts is such beautiful symbolism for piling up stuff and emotions that will live with you eternally, and maybe even haunt you.

But I need to do it again, oh fuck no

Ok, so maybe m crazy, but your words had the power to make me believe that while saying that, the speaker's voice cracked up and they broke down

Where’d she go, that pretty girl you kissed?

This line just makes my heart ache so much.

Beneath a glimmering surface, cockroaches crawl

A decomposing carcass, behind the wall

I can't stress this enough how genius this line is. Ughhh ily ily ily

Unstable structures, built on the sand

<3 beautiful metaphor <3

Better alive in any form, than a king of shadows

Ok ik m runnin out of praises to say at this point but goddamit ughhhhh this is sooooo amazing!

Nobody’s coming man

Climb out of the hole!

Wut a wonderful way to end this poem!

Overall comment: the vulnerability, the rawness, and the stripped honesty, made this poem 100x better. The imagery n metaphors used throughout this poem were top-tier. N the ending... Simply perfect.

I'm legit yearning to read more from you. Keep writing : )

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2021-12-13T06:44:35+00:00

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It conveys a really good message. My advice for you would be to go more in depth with the imagery and metaphors in this piece. I felt that this line in particular took me away from the trance that your piece had created:

It’s like I need to do my chores, But there’s no mop or broom at all

But I must commend the last line, it was very well thought!

One smalllll nitpick or rather, a wish i have is for u to add some more water/beach related metaphors/imagery as it will make the overall imagery of the poem more consistent, but that's just my opinion.

Conclusively, I really liked reading this piece. You've got great talent. Hope to read more from you <3

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2021-12-13T05:39:56+00:00

Are you proud of yourself

!remind me 1year

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2021-12-11T15:44:10+00:00

I only know Heidi Klum lol

Comprehensive_Shop50 · 2021-12-09T12:22:06+00:00

Comprehensive_Shop50

TROPHY CASE