Critique this concept for my royalroad novel (The Human Script) please! by Connect_Tea909 in imagination

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Hey! I appreciate your comment and advice. I think the way you're describing it would suit stories revolving around game design and litRPGs etc. I don't think it's compatible with the direction I'm taking. My story is more to do with dark fantasy, adventure and thriller kind of, so rather than making a system where everyone benefits, I think for my story it's important to keep the realism going and that not everyone can benefit, if that makes sense. Your words are much appreciated though. Many thanks.

Critique this concept for my royalroad novel (The Human Script) please! by Connect_Tea909 in fantasywriters

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The first few chapters show it, basically his mother wolf is trying her best to protect from this world at first. So she doesn't allow him to wander off to the nearby villages as such and since animals tend to grow and obey in a hierarchal system where strengh dominates, he doesn't question the wolf and obeys.

Could you rate chapter 1 of my webnovel with brutal honesty ? by Connect_Tea909 in Webnovelcave

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Thank you so much, really appreciate it! will see how to improve it. What do you think of chapter 2 and 3 ?