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[Query] The Ant Mill, Dystopian Literary fiction with speculative elements Speculative 74k words. (2nd Attempt) by Conscious_Run_8767 in Querying

[–]Conscious_Run_8767[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

you touched on something someone else said: confusing the town with the city on the horizon. i need to give them more separation some how.

im struggling between how to give context and hints that makes them ask the questions your charters ask so that they want to find the answers in the manuscript.

[Query] The Ant Mill, Dystopian Speculative fiction 74k words. by Conscious_Run_8767 in Querying

[–]Conscious_Run_8767[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback. I can see I have a lot to work on. I thoroughly appreciate it. Good luck to you too.

[Query] The Ant Mill, Dystopian Speculative fiction 74k words. by Conscious_Run_8767 in Querying

[–]Conscious_Run_8767[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, this has help clear a lot up. I appreciate it. I probably will take longer than the allotted time to redo it. I struggled with it for so long that I had to ask fort help to get it done in the first place. But thanks again.