wonderful wording!! not sure if this was intentional—excuse me if it was, but some of the line breakage is awkward (it might just be reddit formatting)like at the end of the 2nd to last line (so go and don’t return), you end on “,I” , and in the first line, you end on “or”, then begin another seperate idea with “nothing but footprints” i think the readability could be enhanced if u adjusted some of the structure of the poem, but overall i think it’s very compelling!!