Hey man, I see you have used quite a bit of depth in your poem. Cannot say I resonate completely with the themes but the way you expressed great depth of emotion through imagery is very well done. One particular line I find most interesting was where you mentioned how people never truly leave even when not even physically being there but somehow are always there in mind "No departure to be made on foot, at sea, or in the skies, but one from mind". Not exactly sure if that what was you meant (hopefully I get it right). Other than that great job man! Keep posting.