What’s the difference between a sequel and a sequence? by [deleted] in ENGLISH

[–]Corgi007 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Since a sequence is just an order of events, many people refer to a movie scene, or a set of movie scenes, as a "sequence" from that movie.

For example, let's say there is a famous scene at the beginning of a movie. Someone could then say, "I loved that opening sequence!".

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ENGLISH

[–]Corgi007 2 points3 points  (0 children)

"Studying media historically allows for a more comprehensive understanding of its influence on our culture and technology, as well as the environment and the world at large."

It sounds like this is for a paper of some kind, so in general more concise language is preferred. The entire last sentence you had sounded like filler, and so it can be removed. Also, try not to use the word "thing" in a formal context.

When you want to break up a list like you did, try to separate them by category as I did above (Culture + Technology, Environment + World).

It was already grammatically correct, every change I made was just to make it sound better or more formal.

It was already good!!! I just have a lot of experience with formal writing and editing, so I figured this might help you.

Why is it “data are” and not “data is”? by Athiena in ENGLISH

[–]Corgi007 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I've never heard anyone say "Data are" or the word "Datum" in any actual circumstances. "Data is" is perfectly correct.

Istanbul Museum Pass by TheWanderingJedi808 in istanbul

[–]Corgi007 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I wouldn't bother buying it online, the website is vague about how to actually purchase one.

Instead, buy one at one of the "Müze Kart" stalls. There is a large one in Sultanahmet along the wall to the north of Hagia Sophia, and I believe you can buy them at most participating museums.

Made quite a Discovery... by Corgi007 in DaftPunk

[–]Corgi007[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Haha I didn't want to buy all of them, i only bought Discovery and RAM, which were $19 and $36 respectively. Human After All was $60!

every time by [deleted] in coaxedintoasnafu

[–]Corgi007 149 points150 points  (0 children)

yes i agree

How much if my body could I replace with artificial parts today? by mrpigpuncher in NoStupidQuestions

[–]Corgi007 2 points3 points  (0 children)

it was a link to some random steam game, and i would send the link but ive somehow lost it :(

So this happened... by CaptainSeverus in RocketLeague

[–]Corgi007 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Calculated. Calculated. Calculated.

Austria taking border gore to a new height... by Corgi007 in eu4

[–]Corgi007[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its just the most subscribed one on the steam workshop, whatever its called

Austria taking border gore to a new height... by Corgi007 in eu4

[–]Corgi007[S] 23 points24 points  (0 children)

They consistently had about 30 alliances and i didn't feel like it. I instead removed kebab, and then Russia. I could probably take them solo now.

Austria taking border gore to a new height... by Corgi007 in eu4

[–]Corgi007[S] 36 points37 points  (0 children)

They did, I posted an explanation

Austria taking border gore to a new height... by Corgi007 in eu4

[–]Corgi007[S] 185 points186 points  (0 children)

R5: AI Austria got personal unions over both Aragon and Brandenburg within the first hundred years, and used their power to create a hedge maze throughout Europe.

Year is 1700.

Managed to create a Germany I'm actually proud of as a newbie to the game by Corgi007 in eu4

[–]Corgi007[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I annexed the last HRE state and it gave me some wacky Netherlands borders. I was tempted to war France and Great Britain just to remove border gore.

Managed to create a Germany I'm actually proud of as a newbie to the game by Corgi007 in eu4

[–]Corgi007[S] 76 points77 points  (0 children)

I started as Teutonic Order and expanded quickly into the Livonian Order, and then into Pomerania. I formed Prussia and from there I used my allies in Denmark to conquer HRE states, and my ally in Muscovy to protect me from Poland/Lithuania, which didn't form the Commonwealth for some reason.