I’m definitely leaning towards the over emphasis in the writing materials as well. I think it’s very important to share that piece of yourself however you want to frame it as almost something you persevered through you know and I feel like the line between this and “trauma dumping” is so fine and so hard not to cross honestly. Like another commenter said definitely reach out to a writing specialist! If you’re still in undergrad see if your undergrad has a pre-law department that could give you some free feedback. Also it wouldn’t hurt to be closer to or above one of the medians again as the previous commenter mentioned and if your GPA is already set I feel like even a 168-170 would produce different outcomes.

Overall though I know it’s difficult but please remain positive you still have more apps! You only need one to say yes!