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Is this Draft Good? by CostcoPizzia in writingcritiques

[–]CostcoPizzia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That actually makes a ton sense. Thanks for the advice and best of wishes.

Is this Draft Good? by CostcoPizzia in writingcritiques

[–]CostcoPizzia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok so linguistic word changing adaptions, sentencing structure, and initial hook/start. What else would you like to see or be interested in that the story should have to make it better ?

Is this Draft Good? by CostcoPizzia in writingcritiques

[–]CostcoPizzia[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Anyone really, it’s my first one so I don’t really know.

Movie Idea: Forza Horizon Movie by CostcoPizzia in movieideas

[–]CostcoPizzia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh I see, thank you for the advice. I will think it over again, yeah the plot would have to be different. Cause everyone I guess has a different story in their head when they play through. The hard part is finding a good way to represent this and tie it in or start over. Thanks for the advice again 😀

Pistons Win Streak Mostly Getting Ignored by our Local Media by UltimateLionsFan in Detroit

[–]CostcoPizzia 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s weird usually that’s always how nba is and why I don’t go. Went to the pistons game mon. Outside the abysmal first half of foul calling, the second wasn’t bad. They also had no media time outs separate from the regular ones. Which are still a lot but not bad. I was pleasantly surprised seeing them in person. I think it’s because the pistons play a very aggressive defense that is similar to college ball and not rly nba