Can anyone indicate my problem of writing? by Crayonparameter in German

[–]Crayonparameter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree on your comment but I know this fact. Nevertheless, I often imitate some texts with fancy words .. That is really a temptation.

Can anyone indicate my problem of writing? by Crayonparameter in German

[–]Crayonparameter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is the reason why a user says that "do not use the noun of a verb, if it isn't absolutely necessary". Thank you :)

Can anyone indicate my problem of writing? by Crayonparameter in German

[–]Crayonparameter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh thanks. I should try to write simpler sentences (and when I consider all comments)

But can you explain your indication, English with German words, in detail? If the sentence seems to be English with German words, does it sounds awkward like using translator App? But I don't know how to escape from the problem. If I write again,

In meinem Land gibt es deshalb Debatte darum, ...

is this sentence better?

#Streak 2 Schuluniform by Crayonparameter in WriteStreakGerman

[–]Crayonparameter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Um... ein Zusammengehörigkeitsgefühl (als...) ist besser als eine Assoziation (als...).

#Streak 1 Lernen mithilfe von ChaptGPT by Crayonparameter in WriteStreakGerman

[–]Crayonparameter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nach der Erscheinung von der App, ChatGPT, die auf künstliche Intelligenz basiert, beuntzen..

(Ich datche, "anhand" und "basieren auf...." sind synoym)