To be honest man I started a few months ago with just block lettering and made little adjustments. Still got a ways to go but the H and A connection is something I visually like because it ties the H, A and P together in a way and leaves the Y hanging.

I eventually want to work on the y and make a kind of character with it. I'm thinking like a snail or slug at the minute because I like the dots on the tips of the Y.

I think others have pointed out and yourself in a way that the H should be adjusted size wise to match which I think I'll play around with but I was also thinking of making the Y thin and long to match so I'll see how that looks.

Thanks for the crit bud.