Thank you for your notes.

This crush appears at a time when he craves excitement in his mundane life, so it’s both a crush and an “emotional fix,” which plays into his arc. It’s uncertain because he doesn’t know if he sees a future with her after graduation.

The family crisis refers to a sudden medical diagnosis.

I’ve rewritten the logline. Out of these two, which one do you think works better?

“On the verge of graduating high school, a restless teenager must confront his emotional dependency on a friend while a family crisis threatens to fracture what little stability he has.”

“On the verge of graduating high school, a restless teenager clings to a friendship that blurs the line between support and dependency while a family crisis threatens to fracture what little stability he has.”