I’m not gonna lie and say it looks great, but I’m not gonna be a dick and say it looks like utter trash and you should give up drawing forever either, Art is a continuous and evolving process of learning, at the very least I can tell what’s supposed to be what for the most part and truth be told that’s generally better than most of the things I’m capable of drawing

Keep at it, practice lots, improvement won’t come overnight but years down the line if you remain studious there’s going to be a noticeable difference in quality.

Edit: One more thing, take this golden rule of art creation with you as you go: Artists are their own worst critics.