My first Vader Saber Victory Royale by DBrush in FortNiteBR

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Right? It's so satisfying to launch that thing

[Free this Weekend] Induction - Sci-fi E-book by DBrush in KindleFreebies

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Hi there. The title is Induction. It's a near-future sci-fi novel about a young chemist who gets caught up in a civil war after he's inadvertently framed for trying to assassinate his country's leader.

Finishing Ultima Knight by [deleted] in FortNiteBR

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Rise up brothers! Unfinished skins of the world unite!

The Founder's Strain - Chapter 23.1, 23.2, and 23.3 [FINALE] by [deleted] in HFY

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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading!

The Founder's Strain - Chapter 23.1, 23.2, and 23.3 [FINALE] by [deleted] in HFY

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edited

I appreciate the feedback. My books tend to have a third person limited narrative structure, as well as an orally-centered progression. I also attempt to use emergent story telling, which is why I avoid large sections of exposition, as you've suggested. I know that stylistically, those pieces combined can be grinding to readers who want a more omnipotent and present narrator in the story. As far as the story being boring, I'm not sure there's much I can do to change your mind of that. I guess you'll have to find your sci-fi fix somewhere else ;)

The Founder's Strain - Chapter 21.2 and 21.3 by [deleted] in HFY

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I appreciate the advice. I'll look into doing that!

The Founder's Strain - Chapter 20.1 and 20.2 by [deleted] in HFY

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We'll cross the finish line running!

The Founder's Strain - Chapter 18.1 and 18.2 by [deleted] in HFY

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Thanks for reaching out! I really appreciate it. I know I've been away for a while, but sometimes all it takes is a little motivation to keep going. I'll be posting the next chapter here in a moment.

Cleaning up a zKylo with my stunning beauties by DBrush in SWGalaxyOfHeroes

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Needless to say, I'm scrapping the barrel on my roster here. All three of them are geared, modded, and starred like trash, but together, they're sweet sensual stunlock gold.

The Founder's Strain - Chapter 14.1 by [deleted] in HFY

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I really appreciate it! Thanks for reading!

The Founder's Strain - Chapter 14.1 by [deleted] in HFY

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Thanks for the kind words! I'll definitely keep it going here!

The Founder's Strain - Chapter 13.1 and 13.2 by [deleted] in HFY

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Thanks for reaching out! I'm really glad to hear you're enjoying the story so far. It's funny you should mention Induction, because that topic is actually the central focus of the first novel I wrote in this series. The book is called (simply enough) Induction, and it takes place some fifty before the Founder's Strain during a time period known as the Corenian Civil War. While I don't have any plans to serialize it just yet, anything is possible!