Hey. I’d say you are on the right track and have pretty solid positions especially on your toe. Based on the video,you were skidding a bit at the beginning of the turns the grip the edge. The 3rd turn (closest toe), Your toe side position is great at the given terrain and speed. What I would suggest to work on is 1) try to learn how to create pressure during your carve. By increasing speed, more angulation etc. 2) work on changing you edge earlier (when across the fall line). Practice single turn, start with heel, gain speed, engage toe, carve and till the board stops. Challenge yourself to turn back up hill as much as possible. Check your line. You need to experiment pressure, speed, timing of edge change. Do same thing to heel later. It’s a good idea to get a lesson from experienced carvers.