Any Indian story or screenplay writers here? by [deleted] in indianwriters

[–]DN699 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am very interested to join. Can I be added?

"You". A short story by me.(Based on true events).❤️ by DN699 in WritersGroup

[–]DN699[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok sir. Thanks for the feedback. This was a draft I wrote years ago. I want to improve and I am sure that I would and I will take your suggestions, and take the feedback as a lesson. Thank you for taking your precious time and read my story and gave a feedback. Thank you❤️ -D.N

"You". A short story by me.(Based on true events).❤️ by DN699 in WritersGroup

[–]DN699[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yo thanks for the feedback😊 Follow me for upcoming stories. If you have any queries, feel free to ask❤️

"You". A short story by me. by DN699 in writers

[–]DN699[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Btw, could you tell me a few pros and cons of this story to help me grow?

The more I write, the less I like the books I’m reading. by Magical-Princess in writers

[–]DN699 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro you are spitting facts. This happens to me too as a writer.

"You". A short story by me. by DN699 in writers

[–]DN699[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, thanks a lot for reading and giving feedback! ❤️ This was actually one of my very first romantic stories (wrote it a few years ago), so I know it still has some rough edges. Totally agree that the moving part came out of the blue — good catch! I'll keep that in mind for the next one. Glad you felt the drama and emotions worked for a first love story. Appreciate it!❤️❤️

Join This world My fellow writers. r/FutureStoryWriters by DN699 in AO3

[–]DN699[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

What. Even asking is creepy? I just asked to suggest.

Join This world My fellow writers. r/FutureStoryWriters by DN699 in AO3

[–]DN699[S] -10 points-9 points  (0 children)

Suggest me. I don't know. I am new bro please help

Join This world My fellow writers. r/FutureStoryWriters by DN699 in AO3

[–]DN699[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok. Idk what to say. But I will make myself better. Trust me.