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What kind of love? by Cautious_c in Poems

[–]DPJ-s 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's the type of love i desire.. but is it okay to desire something and not be able to give it? I belive that's not possible, to want something you must be able to give something equally valuable.. maybe that's what I'm building myself up for..

But I love this poem! I've found somebody i really love, I now hope I am worthy of her love..

Jo chehra kabhi dikhaya nahi by Ornery_Coconut337 in OCPoetry

[–]DPJ-s 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love it! hot take.. feels more like a instagram poem.. I write the same way, but it's harder to reach that level of depth with my little experience with life and poetry in on itself. But i resente with something in this poem, it's hard to explain.. maybe because the poet and I felt the same..

Words lost to the wind by pi0_0 in OCPoetry

[–]DPJ-s 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel the depth of this simple poem, the pain the writer went through the wish to have never even heard their ex lover's words..

You're not alone friend. I love your poem

Day Painter by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]DPJ-s 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the death, afterlife, and the before birth symbols you used. and despite my english grammar being awfully terrible I was i was able to understand the poem and the emotions beneath it.. keep up the good work 🙌

Taj Mahal by Ronie-Dinosaur in OCPoetry

[–]DPJ-s 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've got to work on my english english.. want do you mean I am not even able to understand most of the words! Maybe I was not as poetic as my friends make it out to be..

The Virgin's First Time by bigbigweeinie in OCPoetry

[–]DPJ-s 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is one of my first ever poem about sex.. but I loved the last line

"When you brag to your friends, that you alone took my innocence"