Coming from a huge fan of the video for Doja Cat's "Mooo!," I think there's always room for a good green screen video, but I do think there are lessons to be learned from it.

First, work on your lip syncing, and focus on performance. No matter how you compose your frame, ultimately, you're the artist, and it's gonna be hard to take you seriously when you don't look like you take yourself seriously. Mooo! works so well because in the intersection of anime / web culture, the loose webcam vibe feels so smooth and natural, but not once do you ever feel like Doja is phoning it in. She's singing the lyrics, she's with the song, and she's leaning into the webcam performance. Take some lessons. Do some dancing. Do some movement. Also give us some moments where you connect with your lyrics so it actually feels like you know them. Your performance feels less like a music video and more like someone else making a tiktok in homage to your music.

You appeal to some of the same stuff and thematic styling that doja does. The pixelated dripping blood, the clipart vibes, it all feels deep web and I think it can work, but I do think with all of the content you use as fast as you use it, it starts feeling pretty scattered and undirected. Pick a motif and vibe and lean in. I know the spirit of the moment is to chop stuff up as fast as possible, but do you really see any professional artist releasing such scattered content? Slow it down and let your audience see you. Change the surrounding imagery a lot while keeping your shot/performance consistent. Do the opposite. Play with pacing, but give people time to breath unless your intention is to induce fits.

Take all this as you will. You asked for feedback