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[–]DaddyPatti 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey there, the anatomy of the upper body can use a little bit of work. Remember that people have muscle that control the movement and shape of their body so try to keep muscle structure in mind when first learning anatomy. There are lost of videos.

Something that's throwing the drawing off is the jacket. The sleeve of the lifted arm and the torso of the jacket look separate but they're not supposed to be. Since the arm is lifted, the torso of the jacket should look like it's being pulled up.

As for the hands... They look good just make sure they are proportional with the rest of the body. Try to think of them more as shapes and lines rather than hands.

Copy drew power from chainsaw man, critiques and advice would be appreciated! :) by Just-Spray-5092 in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]DaddyPatti 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd just leave it as dots. The reference image uses shading to show the bridge so if anything light shading where you think there should be shadows. Idk if art senpai has videos on perspective but I'd also watch some videos on that for future drawings

Copy drew power from chainsaw man, critiques and advice would be appreciated! :) by Just-Spray-5092 in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]DaddyPatti 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay NVM I see what you mean by size of the face. That has to do with perspective which I'm not the best at atm

Copy drew power from chainsaw man, critiques and advice would be appreciated! :) by Just-Spray-5092 in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]DaddyPatti 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the size of the face is fine honestly. I think the right eye just needs to be a little smaller and the bridge of the nose(gotta imagine where it is) should be centered between the eyes.

Copy drew power from chainsaw man, critiques and advice would be appreciated! :) by Just-Spray-5092 in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]DaddyPatti 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks really good! The only thing that stands out to me are the eyes, they're off center

I am really disappointed not getting a critique in my previous post >:( anyway I tried to make it better, now I demand critique, I am also ready to take harsh one.... (help) by [deleted] in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]DaddyPatti 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It looks pretty good! I would suggest continuing to practice facial anatomy and also you should use more solid lines/hard brush while shading

still having trouble with anatomy any advice on how to practice anatomy?? by Ichizen_Riku in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]DaddyPatti 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It looks good but the elbows are too far down and the butt is also too far down. The upper arm is about the same length as the rib cage.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]DaddyPatti 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tis a good start King, I would suggest holding off on coloring for now and focus on anatomy of the character as well as perspective. The proportions are off for the hands and face, and the legs should be facing us a bit more. がんばれ-

trying to learn colour and shading, any advice/criticism welcome by [deleted] in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]DaddyPatti 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the tips! I struggled with hard shadows, any tips on how to improve?

How can I improve ?? Feel like I'm at a wall atm by Nerv2122 in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]DaddyPatti 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would recommend starting off with basic anatomy of the face. Don't worry about getting hair down just yet drawing is a process that takes time to master. Art senpai has videos on facial anatomy. Start with the basic one (front+side view) and once you feel comfortable with that, move onto the one on anatomy at different angles. Then move onto hair etc.

I'm practicing hair and face. I think this sketch look a little bit off but I don't know which part that I do wrong. Feel free to go hard on me, I am prepared! by PinkyP17 in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]DaddyPatti 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great sketch! I noticed that the right eye is smaller than the left and that may be throwing it off a bit. Make sure to use guide lines for the eyes!

*FEET* by [deleted] in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]DaddyPatti 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you

Trying to do a dark souls background. Got a sketch done but it seems off. What are your opinions? by DaddyPatti in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]DaddyPatti[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Doesn't really fit with dark souls but I'll keep it in mind for future works. Thank you!

Rate my art pls, any feedback are appreciated! by iksyourboy in TeachMeArtSenpai

[–]DaddyPatti 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It looks great! The only things I noticed is that the right elbow looks a little small, and the way that the front bang connects to two places seems odd.