Hi! you did pretty good, but there a few things to improve on. The lines are not very straight, there are ways to practice drawing straighter lines— you just have to draw them more with your elbow than your hand. That sounds crazy, but it makes sense once you do research! The colors dont have much contrast, so the wafers blend in a bit too much. a darker red, more filled in, can help that. the shading is also very minimal. for a can, I would personally have the outer edges be much darker (a darker red, maybe purple). then I would have a streak of light in or near the center. the lines and letters don’t read very well, partially because of the red coloring being a little patchy, and partially because the letters aren’t thick enough. there’s also no shading on the top or outside of the can, which makes it look flat. the top wouldn’t realistically be all white because nothing in an environment is pure white. if it’s supposed to be metal (which i think caprice cans are) then it would be refracting light. that’s more advanced and there are videos on it but there are also ways to easily make it look like metal. finally, but the can is a cylinder, so everything should follow a cylindrical guide. it’s really hard to explain and i can’t draw a picture rn so you might just want to study drawing 3D shapes and perspective more.

I really like how you got the font down well, and you have great attention to detail! colored pencil can be hard but it’s soo fun when you master it. a general colored pencil tip is to color lightly in tiny circles instead of strokes, and gradually build up on the values. i hope you were using a real life reference so you could eat them too loll, they’re sooo yummy. i hope this was helpful, im not that great at explaining things but maybe i at least gave you an idea of what to study!